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ROOM 365: PRINCESS OF UR-CARNOSA
The final room is a massive luxurious bedroom.  There is a monstrous pink bed in the centre of the room big enough to fit a whole squad of soldiers.  Lying on it is the PRINCESS OF UR-CARNOSA and the NPC PRINCE the player has been looking for.  The NPC PRINCE looks unharmed.  He's unconscious, a little skinny and covered in red lipstick marks.

The PRINCESS notices you looking at his and pouts angrily that she's not giving up her new favourite toy.  It's time for the final battle.

FIGHTFUCK: PRINCESS OF UR-CARNOSA

The first action the PRINCESS takes is to summon the player onto her Eternal Bed, a big soft pink bed in its own pocket dimension.  Like the QUEEN, she fights with supercharged lust and charm magic, with the goal of trying to make the player submit long enough for her to get on top and properly break him with a full succubus sex bout.  She's not as powerful as the QUEEN, but will have a few tricks of her own to justify her presence as the final boss.

Unfortunately, the PRINCESS's infatuation with the PRINCE does not extend to the player.  Her Bad End will be a suitably epic bout of succubus fucking, but unlike her 'favourite toy', the PRINCESS doesn't feel any inclination to keep the player alive, and will completely drain him in the usual succubus way.

If the player wins, the PRINCESS will teleport herself away in a sulk.

This is where one (or maybe more) of the stingers will come into play with the various named NPCs.  One (likely the ROGUE) is an assassin tasked by opposing foreign powers to make sure the PRINCE is not recovered.  Should the player have kept them alive during his path through Ur-Carnosa, they will pop up at the end to assassinate the PRINCE as the player is helping him to leave.  This is one of the potential endings.  Not necessarily Bad.  There is war, but a corrupt royal family is removed in the process.

The other ending would be to return the PRINCE.  War is averted.  The SUCCUBUS COMPANION has got the player to achieve some of her own aims (either political advancement or to battle-test Ur-Carnosa's defences in order to improve them).

And that's the end.  365 days, 365 rooms, one 'mega dungeon' that might provide some useful material for a future game.

I'll post my thoughts on the exercise and how I might use it in a future post.



ROOM 364: FINAL DUNGEON

This isn't really a full dungeon.  It's the 13th region, but in keeping with similar games, it's pretty much a straight run to the final boss with no obstacles.

The player finds themselves in opulent quarters fit for a queen, except wrong.  There's too much sex.  It stains the air and saturates everything.  The player can feel an itchy sensation in their balls just by standing there.

There are no monsters here or any loot to find.  It's just a straight run up the stairs to the final... bedroom.

Comments

CrimsonCrown

I like the idea that the canonical “best” ending is if the Rogue is kept alive and assassinates the Prince. If there were a hypothetical sequel it could start from the timeline. The Prince lives it can still be a good ending, but slight ominous with the suggestion that the Succubus Princess still has power over him with her infatuation magic and that through her influence his kingdom might eventually become like Ur-Carnosa.

manyeyedhydra

There's definitely ideas to run with. My gut instinct is the 'best' ending should probably be the player doing their duty and pulling the Prince out of there. I think it makes a nice contrast that the player knows the Prince is an exceptionally shitty human being, but the player knows that if they don't save him, a lot of people are going to die in a nasty war. The NPC interactions are something I want to expand. I like the idea that they might show up later to help the player, or they might cause future problems. Witcher 3 is probably a good example to take inspiration from for this.

Zavijava

Damn, prince is the luckiest MF in the multiverse ;) Dunno if I'd have the heart to stop a guy from living the dream of getting kissed into submission by his qt succubus gf... then again he's an asshole prince so maybe ;) Would love an option to ask her to hit us up with a friend of hers so we can share the same fate? :P