Aspen or Rouge?
- Aspen 1
- Rouge 0
Waaaay back when I started LF, I began the way I did so I could get to know my characters. That's why there was a big chunk of just Aspen, and then a big chunk of just Rouge. When I do revisions, I'm going to move those chapters around so that they happen more or less at the same time. The question is: Who should be first? When I wrote the beginning, it made sense to me that Aspen would be first. (For reasons that you STILL don't know, but which have to do with the no-longer-published prologue.) Without that prologue, it really doesn't matter who starts. I just want it to be the character who will appeal the most to the person who's just starting out. Which one will get a new reader "hooked" the fastest? Which one makes the most sense, and why? Leave comments below!