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I got a review on RR that made me decide to finally just take down the original prologue (about Bree). I wrote it almost as its own short story originally, and while it's very important, it is misleading to a reader just starting out, so while it makes sense in MY head, it doesn't make sense in the flow of the story (much like the initial introductory chapters will also be changed around so that they happen chronologically, at least as much as I'm able.)

In any case, since I'm not going to invest my time in doing significant editing right now (I'm going to make it from Bree's implant, so it'll be more first-person, and Bridget will show it to Rouge/Motte around chapter 27), it'll be easier to just take it down for now, and I'm just too squishy for reviews like that anyway (sigh). Bree will show up in book three, though, and actually be a secondary character with whom Rouge interacts in both VO and in person for several chapters! (very minor, hopefully not-really-a, spoiler)

BUT I will take the time to explain to you guys, since I really appreciate you, and once I get the edited chapter done, I WILL share it here, even if I don't post it on RR!

Also, I managed to get my five chapters done this week, but the next two weeks will probably be three-chapter weeks, thanks to holiday-related stuff and daughter being out of school.

Thanks, everyone, and I hope you have a great week!


SilverSidhe

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