Home Artists Posts Import Register

Downloads

Content

Thank you to everyone who voted!

The winner of the poll was "Peter succeeds in taking control of both cartels and becomes the undisputed Queen of the Underworld."

I've had so much fun telling Peter's story. With this post, I've included all the previous parts so you can read his tale straight through. Overall, there are 14 pages! The last five are "Part 4."

I can't wait to hear what you think of the end (?) of Peter's story. 😊

Files

Comments

Jessica Thence

This was a great story, but it made me think of a premise that seemed exciting. Some sort of criminal boss, maybe the leader of a gang or a drug cartel. The people that work for him are compensated handsomely, but in order to get into that inner circle you have to show your loyalty by sacrificing your gender. So all of his folks are reluctant trans women. Some choose to make the change to live the good life, some are more coerced. The low level folks in the household....servants, etc.....are former enemies or people that have wronged him in some way who were also transformed. Seems like something you could do a lot with!

Alyson Greaves

Too sleepy to be effusive but Peter's story has been fantastic 😍

emoryahlberg

Thank you!!! 💖 I'm wondering how long it will be before she fully accepts her "Maya" identity -- and gets an invitation to join Second Dawn. 😁

Alyson Greaves

Conversations on the island: Maya: "So, how'd you get started? For me it was a drug bust gone wrong, and then there was a marriage and a little light murder." Holly: "Oh, there was a war between exorbitantly rich men. One of them was my father, and he lost." Jill: "...I was a surfer." Maya: "Like, the leader of a gang of drug-smuggling surfers, or something?" Jill: "No. Just a surfer." Maya: "Wow. You people really run the gamut, don't you?"

emoryahlberg

🤣 Davis: "I was a conventional family man and then-" All the girls at once: "SHUT UP, DAVIS."

Pelicanboss

This has been a great story although not the ending I was hoping for. I really liked the introduction of Helen, a person which could have turned things pretty disastrous for Peter. Maybe a "what if" second ending could show a much darker outcome for Pete, not death of course, but a resulting new freedom less life of sexual exploitation.

Alyson Greaves

(whoops, I left these comments in the app, no idea why they didn't thread properly)

Alyson Greaves

Also "I don't mean to be disrespectful, but where did you come up with the idea of transforming men into women?" Maya, sweating, closing a browser tab which is open on patreon.com/emoryahlberg: "It came to me in a dream."

maven poulter

Excellent story and images! Thank you

MaggieHeels

OMFG... ahhhhh my mind is blown away...

Ella Cherry

Of course my choice didn’t win the poll again, but of course I love it all the same as always! 😂 what a great story, Emory! Thanks and congrats! ❤️

Terry Rose

Awesome story Emory! Can't wait for your next creation.

emoryahlberg

Ella, you have to have a record for choosing the "wrong" polling option 😂. I'm sorry that keeps happening to you! But I'm so happy you enjoyed the conclusion to Peter's / Maya's story.

Allan Kim

I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for your great effort.

emoryahlberg

Thanks so much, Allan! It was really fun to explore Peter / Maya’s story so in-depth.

emoryahlberg

Thanks so much, Pelican. Yes, Helen was definitely a wrench thrown into Peter’s plans. There was definitely a chance that she could have spoiled everything, resulting in Diego learning the truth about his “wife.” 😬