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Ongoing adventures here: https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/the-talon-of-wisdom/list?title_no=485558

In the world of prophetic readings, a thing should be disqualified as a prophesy if you're expending numerous resources to make it happen, and it wouldn't happen if you took no action. But then, of course the prophesy of Oedipus never would have occurred if the Oracle hadn't predicted it. They're tricky things, and let's be honest, not entirely fair when you get down to it.

And once you accept prophesies are whimsical and not at all reliable, you get right back into that territory of fate no longer being your master.

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Anonymous

So here is some critical feedback. For the past several comics, each panel has been basically the same- a couple of talking heads and a word balloon. And although it may be good dialog, it makes for a boring comic to have multiple panels of just talking heads. I'm not sure what else you could have done... maybe had the characters acting out some kind of dream scene rather than just floating in a rainbow? But it's starting to feel more like a reading a script than a full comic.

Anonymous

I agree with this dude, the script is on point, but the visuals are lacking. It's a visual medium and the characters aren't moving that much with no dynamic movement or shot placement