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The rest of Kit is here:
https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/kits-orphanage/list?title_no=181549 

So I'm trying to do a little better with establishing transitions. Here's the stairs, there's Benny in the door, we're sneaking across the room! It winds up taking more space to visually inform the reader but based on the feedback I've been getting with Stebe and its inexplicable scene changes, it's important to use that space for this.

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Applestone

Okay, I did not expect that you'd apply Stebe feedback to Kit, but I like it. I didn't have issues with Kit's scene changes, but I like that after all this dialog there's a fairly silent page now. The rats are a nice idea. Kinda reminds me of Full Metal Alchemist, only with clearer rules. I wonder if you can get back items from the rats by writing poetry for them or something.

Applestone

Or maybe if they have a WC3 account one could level up their characters. XD

Anonymous

Get them used to nicotine. Once they're addict, bribe 'em for the secrets of the universe.