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The Young Lady is a Reborn Assassin - Tier 1 Releases (Patreon)

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2022-12-02 12:39:35
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Alt link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/13t9d9uXLZ06uGB1aR06p4HFfdjAeRUzZ4d_CQ4DiBQ8/edit?usp=sharing


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Erik Hansen

In chapter 4 I got the impression that Maria did not really remember this VN because it was of middling quality and she had played a huge number of them in her past life; a later chapter mentions she played this one early in her time in the genre and moved on to better ones for a long time before finally transmigrating to this world. Then in later chapters she seems to know pretty specific information about characters relations in the game and even specific events E.g. biology tutoring of Claudius. I feel like chapter twelve would be more consistent with memories of Love Revolution being hazy to have Maria be suspicious of why the biology teacher is asking her to TA and then deduce it must be a relationship flag from the game instead of knowing it first and confirming.

Root
>>104969996

The impression I've gotten so far from the story is she knows enough related to the first game (so in these early stages, with the important characters, she's aware of). But beyond that, for the spin offs or the sequels or so on? It's definitely a haze and more knowing by osmosis than anything

Erik Hansen
>>104969996

Yep. I agree 100% with that read now. I suppose Maria is probably causing enough changes that even her knowledge of the first game is going to be quickly out of date.

Rakkis157

Hmm... in the current format, it is a little hard to read the pdfs on phone. Would it be possible for the next pdfs to be in slightly larger fonts?

DeadShin
>>107555123

I'm going to start doing so in the next chapter, but it might still be too small so please update me on how the larger font is and whether it needs to be even bigger. Ty.

Melting Sky

Just a heads up. A double action revolver has that name precisely because it can be used either as a single action where you pre-cock the hammer for a smoother faster shot or you can just pull the trigger again to actuate the hammer for faster follow-up shots if you haven't the time or skill to pre-cock the hammer for your next round. It's perfectly possible to use a double action the way you would use a single action where you pre-cock the hammer for every shot.

DeadShin
>>108339875

Indeed, I forgot. That'll be edited when posted publicly later to make more sense.

Anonymous

Hey, the chapter numbering seems off to what has been posted publicly (ie Public Ch 36 is Ch 37 here)

Melting Sky

Heads up! You have the wrong chapter posted for Tier 1. It should be chapter 45 not 48.

Anonymous

Can we please get the right chapter here?

Kinnos Sharpe

The color scheme on the PDF is very difficult to read. Could you just put the entire thing into a google doc? A few other authors I'm backing do that and its so much better. Especially on phone.

DeadShin
>>112936317

I can do that for you. I'll include a doc for each tier with all of the chapters and subheadings for each so you can navigate them.

Anja Höglind

Chapter 55 is uploaded, not 54 btw

Anonymous

Chapter 64 is uploaded instead of 61 again :D