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A bigger chapter at last! Is this good or bad...? (26,700 Words)


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http://wanderinginn.com/2020/09/13/7-46-k/

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Anonymous

Not a single Erin chapter after a long break :(

Anonymous

As long as she doesn't switch to baleros. And honestly I've been liking the flos chapters more. There's been less flos in the chapters and more focus on the other characters in chandrar, who are pretty cool mostly

Cyclic Addict Recovering

&gt; why introduce something new when there's so many ongoing storylines still? Depth of world. I think if you were looking for a typical litrpg story with less ongoing storylines and more gratification, there are many on RoyalRoad that can satisfy your fix. I find myself saving up chapters to read 2-3 at a time, because I know when I sit down for a chapter it's more involved... and to enjoy it I'll want more brainpower to spare. Honestly I haven't read the last two chapters just yet, because I've still been saving them up, even though I'm up-to-date with all the other authors I Patreonize. During a typical week I'll read a lot of other chapters from other authors to feed my reading fix, but weekends are when I treat myself to immersing myself in this world. It's a different kind of storytelling style. Honestly it's an impressive one, because it takes an unusual level of maturity for a writer to be able to build up a world like this and pull it off. Would we enjoy Game of Thrones or Lord of the Rings as much if there weren't as many storylines in them?

Anonymous

So many plot threads, I can't wait to see pirate weave something wonderful with them! &lt;3

Andrew

Thank you!

Anonymous

It’s good .. longer the bigger

Gyoshi _

I just realised Fetohep is basically Willy Wonka

KDP

Good chapter! :-)

Anonymous

I feel like Mr Flos. I did not see the Minotaurs coming.... Were there any hints in prior chapters that lead to this? Last time I remember they were helping Wil and the gang. But damn that chase part! fantastic writing.

Ram nevet

there were several sprinkled among the niers chapter but the first one would be in 4.06KM where a diplomat from minos asked funding from izril nobles for a fleet against flos

Ford-Thomas Frank Loveland

It has also been mentioned recently that they were near chandar but weren't able to land since no nation with sea access allowed them too

Ford-Thomas Frank Loveland

I am not entirely sure why the fought against him originally but I'm pretty sure they destroyed his fleet and may have killed his gardner from the 7.

Joshua Flowers

I went into this chapter not expecting a fight for some reason. Huh

Anonymous

So I know that king of challenges is his class and king of duels is his title but does anyone else sometimes find it a bit clunky how they just switch randomly between the two when referring to Raelt? It's not really a criticism but I think it would flow better if they just stuck to one. King of duels makes him sound like a Yu-Gi-Oh character

Andrew

Thank you!

Anonymous

Wow which is great and influential language for how tremendous is this addition to the sum of the wandering inn saga? !! I am blown away at the way you twist and wriggle your characters , ah a satisfied sigh exudes from my coffee tainted mouth. Well done Pirate

Anonymous

Well punctuation was never my forte

Flash Red

Other characters refer him to his title king of duels but the “narrator” of the story refers to his class King of challenges.

Vic Coleman

I just don't really see Flos interacting with any part of the story I care about. Like of all the plots or sub plots Flos ist the least interesting because his story arcs feel repetitive, really low risk of him losing, and I like the wandering inn for the not normal fantasy characters..And FLos is a conquering king, yea. Give me more of anything else, please .

Matti Fjellgren

WIhat? love the king, its cool to follow the antagonistic side from time to time and he is very carismatic in a twisted kind of way. And the chapter with troy in the monster city was one of my favorites. Also to watch Realt strugle against impossible odds have been a thrillride.

Vic Coleman

There are other Antagonistic characters and plots. Hell some of them are dangerous because how are charismatic they are. Off the top of my head I want to know more about the UN, Blighted Kingdom, either of the young dragons..Are there other dragons we do not know about? Magolia, Salis of lights, the goblins any of them, HoH, if the Titan ever will find Erin, if the god is doing anything, and is the god scary to the world or just hates bugs.. What about Lion's family, or Griffin Hunt...Like Mrsha and her friends too. Hell what if there are just pure elves somewhere doing something magical or like chapters on Rose and the other humans in the Inn that have basically been background

Anonymous

Vic, I think what you just described is what makes the story so wonderful and at the same time challenging to follow. There is something for everybody but the sheer breadth of the storyline makes it difficult to progress and sometimes you get something you won’t necessarily enjoy

Caanbo

Please god no more of part two of K

Anonymous

I love the K chapters! The race was amazing to read! Looking forward to part two

Tocks

Pw for 7.47k?

Anonymous

me no like the K