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10.13 (Patreon)

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2024-05-04 23:40:32
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I wrote a lot. But I'm going to get help! Maybe. I'm working on it. Wait, is this even a problem for you? (51,859 Words)

https://wanderinginn.com/2024/05/04/10-13/

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Comments

Aaron Hicks

Yay! Edit: Nice use of excoriated... can't believe that 52K words is part 1. Can't wait til next Sat.

Zack J

huzzzzah!!!!

WyrdWizard

Not a problem for me Pirate. I don't ever shirk my duties to read your story. Never, ever.

Duality

Is there a writers anonymous you can join?

Conner Reedy

I personally enjoy the longer chapters, but I still think it would be healthier to try and write shorter chapters.

kyle

Thankyou pirate for all you do.

Oxysmarton

Who dare disturb…👁️👄👁️ let me grab my glasses

Sam Martin

I flipping love you! :)

Jordan Drummond

Can’t wait till I have time to read this!

Forva

Can’t wait to read it!

Red

Gold,Gold,Gold

PearsMan

Looking forward to reading this!

Travis Beecher

. . . . . . . . .Absolutely THRILLED with the style and pacing of this chapter. The bit about chairs was masterfully done. Her internal dialogue with the gold was great. And honestly? The back and forth with the Brothers had me tear up a bit. Superb. The real MVP of the chapter is of course that absolute banger of an artwork with Imani. "No one ever asks how do I fit?" 🤣. Bravo.

Anton Shomshor

I didn’t have time last night to read this whole thing. I did anyway. I am gladly suffering the consequences this morning having dreamt of gold. I really thought Lyonette was going to drop coin on high quality chairs for the inn. Why not get the most comfortable amenities for your guests if gold is no factor?

Magnus

Great drama and . . . . . . wonderful Bird is back!

PearsMan

Gold gold gold!! Alright onto the chapter itself. Quite fun. Erin skills slowly impacting the inn, and maybe even lyonnette too? Is the princess of the inn showing qualities of the “queen of the castle” or it’s mascot? Bird coming back as female confused me. I get the idea of hey if you get to comeback why not change it up. That logic is fine, it’s just new and different and I can’t really picture Bird with breasts so I’m glad the inn chaos stopped too to go “huh?!” It also feels a bit werid for bird because he never cared for these things, he never brought it up, so why do it suddenly. That is what dosent make sense, the logic applied to the context of this character comes out of nowhere. I think because it makes no difference to who bird is I might still go with he/him in my mind for clarity and easy of visual n understanding, since that’s how he was, and there was no ease of transition into this new thing. he might switch again and again so having to do the switches everytime oof. Marsha showing her heart and checking up on everyone was lovely (and the meme with Lyonette) Speaking of lyonette I didn’t get the joke rose was calling out on her? Anyone get the earth reference?

Fitty Sebum

That was cool, thanks :)

Scott Soper
>>137152380

Fawlty Towers by John Cleese from the seventies. A great sitcom about the worst Innkeeper in Britain. The episode is about the time a family from Germany scheduled a stay, "No one mention the war!"

Travis Beecher
>>137152380

I think it speaks even more so to who they are. Bird is pretty off the cuff on very direct and honest observations. So I think if they had the thought while receiving the rights, I 100% believe they were like, huh I have an idea. It just seems so Bird to me. But that's just my opinion. You want to see an completely unbelievable bird difference read the first few chapters he appeared. That's a big gap, lol Also, thanks for mentioning the effects on Lyonette. Didn't even think about that! Great foresight there

Liz Mills

Poor Saliss|Onieva! So close to hope, yet so far away 😢

Red
>>137152380

If and if this is a big IF but what IF the qurass tells her to move the [necromancer] village near them + magic school after that she could have little queendom would she have her class upgraded? From princess to queen or would she need her mother to allow it what i am saying is would it he from princess of the inn -> to queen/princess of the land like Lucan did essentially adding the inns passives to village not sanctuary's or add it like fheto had

Robert Johansson
>>137152380

When I read Bird was now a women I was waiting for him to tell Lyonette that She was now a Queen and out ranked her but I'm not sure if she lost that class when she died.

Jaden Ayad (edited)

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