Not the Hero piece of 18 v3 (Patreon)
Published:
2016-08-21 07:43:36
Edited:
2023-09-07 19:01:30
Imported:
2024-08
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Once again I'm republishing the entire chapter because I made edits, though I don't think there's anything significant between the obvious edit at the start of the chapter, and the part where he starts giving details about the caribou.
I made an effort to trim down some things that seemed a bit over the top for a T rating based mostly on Brian's suggestions. Hopefully the new material manages to stay within bounds as well.
The fight scene finally gets started in this piece. I may end up having to break this chapter into two pieces, because it's looking like it may go over 30K words. I have written entire multipart stories that are shorter than that.