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February 10, 2024

NOTE: I need to do some plotting on Combat Healer, so here is another IDH chapter. It’s finally a steamy one, so hope you enjoy (a lot of you have been asking for it).

 

Also, here is Gwen’s outfit in this chapter (a latex bodysuit with latex maid outfit).

Screenshot of Gwen from the Game:

  

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- CHAPTER 144 -

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FEEDBACK: Thoughts?

Did you like this chapter? Anything you disliked?

Any thoughts about Rosa, Natalie, and Avery forming that bond? (It was kind of expected at this point.)

 

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Comments

Mocmo

You need to start a offshoot, called inner ramblings of a Devil, and make it optional reading. Half of this chapter was mind numbing and then aggravating as fuck. Seeing as how most if not all of his rambling, was only useful to someone who hasn't read anything up until this chapter

Florida Reader

The mental talk is a feature of this type of story and of this story in particular. I agree it can sometimes be a bit excessive. But I enjoyed this chapter as a bridging chapter.

SovietDegendays

Awesome chapter it's been a long time coming.

William L

Honestly, this really seems to be more 'filler' than anything else. In SciFi/Fantasy erotica, even harem stories, I find detailed sex scenes to be useful mostly in early chapters to draw in the reader and give emotional weight to the character relationships. But later, they just become either repetitive, over the top (see the absurd 'fisting train', that was referenced in this chapter), or emotionally vacant. These group sessions neither move the plot forward nor the emotional connections to the characters.If there needs to be a sex scene, I'd much rather it had been a one-on-one with Avery. No one should be introduced to sex the way Avery has been. She's really been treated like crap. All group sex, without even recently dealing with her supposed kink about wanting her Mom to take her boyfriend. She's just been turned into a generic 'sub' for anyone, when she started as having strong 'romantic' potential.

oldntokn

Too much meandering internal thoughts. It seemed he was having shower sex, started thinking a bunch about the women he wasnt with at the time, then with no transition had moved on to another group.