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December 3, 2023

NOTE: I've been sick this last week (and I still am), so it's been a bit of struggle to get this one done, but hopefully you guys enjoy this chapter.

As usual, I've got some plot planned that you guys hopefully won't have been anticipating.


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- CHAPTER 138 -

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FEEDBACK: Thoughts?

1. The whole 'Gwen being Kai's motivation for 2000 years' is kind of a big deal, but also something that is kind of difficult to communicate, how major that is for him to realize that, especially since they don't really have time right now to 'have a moment.'

It's also perhaps not that big of a 'reveal' simply because there's already been a lot of foreshadowing, and I think I've at least heavily hinted at it once previously (like when Gwen reveals the pendant she'd found when she woke up).

2. Also, I'm sure some of you may have an idea of who the 'memory' at the end is about.


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Comments

Alice Duffield

My assumption is this woman is the woman from the “prequel” story you wrote not Elizabeth. (I can’t think of her name).

Carsten

hm, just read this. My first thought is, might there be the werewolf connection to the daughters of Elizabeth? I like how the situation evolved from the Claire hell to the conversation and path finding and the Dante situation. Creating even more loose ends with the 2 Beaumont 'slayers'. This side of the story will still have some surprises I guess.