PROGRESS REPORT - May 20, 2024 - Figuring Out The June Short Begins! (Patreon)
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Hello, everyone!
Last week's Progress Report was dedicated to sharing the full 24-minute WIP of Overbreed Ep1 that I had available at the time, and I had noted then that the new Progress would be reported on this week.
I didn't get as much feedback as I had hoped I would get from that sharing, with only a single comment on it (and very much appreciated), so I am going to run with the old adage of "no news is good news."
Overbreed Progress
So then, let's move onto the new progress! The WIP I shared last week was 24:27. As of now, the runtime is sitting at 27:13. There really isn't too much to report on that front, things have been going along swimmingly.
The biggest thing to report is that, as I tweeted about some days back, I have decided to rewrite the anal sequence from my original script, as part of the knock-on effect of the planned position not working, and the new position not lending itself to easily transitioning into the later planned positions.
This rewrite is actually going extremely well in my opinion. I honestly like it better than the original version I had drafted. It sees Mercy being more physically dominant with Sombra, if this week's preview animation didn't already hint at. And it has Sombra being both more explicit with her enjoyment in the rough treatment, and more vocal in her desire for Mercy to knock her up.
How do you get breeding dirty talk into an anal sequence, you may wonder? Well, the line "My pussy is jealous of my asshole right now - you better make up by pumping lots of kids into it" may or may not be penned.
The new anal sequence also takes an idea I've enjoyed for a long time but haven't explored before and runs with it: the idea of futanari characters getting "stuck". It's a fairly well-documented phenomenon that women experience, though it isn't exclusive to women and men can experience it as well, of getting to the edge of orgasm but being unable to get over the hurdle, constantly riding the high of orgasm but not able to find release. It's basically an involuntary edging, and it can drive people absolutely mad as they try and try but simply can't cum.
The new transition into anal entertains the idea, with Sombra observing how she's cum several times and Mercy hasn't shot a drop yet, before suggesting that maybe switching to anal will give Mercy the stimulation she needs to get "unstuck" and pump some kids into Sombra's belly. The new anal sequence plays with that idea, with Mercy getting gradually more and more frustrated with her inability to orgasm--and more and more rough with Sombra, as a consequence of that frustration. Which Sombra just absolutely loves.
At any rate, that's where we are now. I was hoping to get to Sombra's anal orgasm before this week's post, but the sequence ended up running longer than I intended to as it just keeps getting hotter and hotter. Though I did finally get into the position that leads up to the orgasm, with Mercy moving from pinning Sombra's head down to Mercy holding Sombra's neck in a chokehold. At this point, the video has already established that Sombra cums hard to being choked, so Mercy squeezing her throat between forearm and bicep puts Sombra on the fast track to a third orgasm - leaving a stuck and frustrated Mercy seeking yet another avenue for release. 🥵
The Search For A June Video
With all of that in mind, as I have mentioned for a few weeks now, May 20 marks the official end of this Overbreed sprint. I am now shifting gears to focusing on making a shorter video to be released in June, before I resume with another month-long sprint on Overbreed.
As I have mentioned previously, I currently have 11 ideas vying for my attention on what the next video could be. I have spent a bit of time over the past few weeks fiddling with them, making proof-of-concept posters or partial storyboards, just to get a feel for the ideas. I've shared a few of these on here and on Twitter.
But now that the Overbreed sprint is over, I am dedicating my full time and effort to exploring these ideas. As I said, I have 11 of them, and they are at various stages of discovery. Some of them are fully written out and storyboarded, others are barely more than a one-sentence summary in my notes.
I'd like to take a moment to share all of the competing ideas with you now, a sample of what all I have for them (if anything), and my current thoughts on them. I would love to hear your guys' and gals' thoughts on these ideas, too. What all is catching your interest? What all is a pass for you? What would you like to see made? Let me know!
Primordium Episode 2
Probably the most obvious choice from the outside looking in. Primordium is explicitly designed to be 7ish-minute-long episodes, which fit perfectly in the 5-to-10-minute range that I am aiming for with these short videos.
The only problem is, I don't really know what I want to do with it concretely.
The purpose of Episode 2 is to demonstrate the power of the titular substance, and what all it could give the ladies. Specifically, they use the world-bending substance to live out their most depraved sexual fantasies. However, they have such a small amount of it that they only get a taste of that depravity - which then motivates them to find the source of the substance, so that they can live the rest of their lives blissed out on the most fucked up sex you can imagine.
So far, the best way I can imagine visualizing that is through tentacles. But while tentacles are hot, they're also tentacles - which are an absolute fucking bitch to animate under the best of circumstances, with arbitrary Bezier IK. And Source Filmmaker does not have arbitrary Bezier IK, which makes them even more of a bitch to animate.
And frankly, I'm just terrified at the prospect of animating Triss' 15-tentacle orgy. Ciri's three-hole all-the-way-through is intimidating its own way too, but Triss takes the terror crown here.
I will probably spend some time trying to think of alternatives to tentacles for this one. Maybe they are temporarily teleported to full fantasy worlds that indulge their depravities? I need to think on it.
Maid to Facefuck Sequel
This one is probably in the Goldilocks zone of "most thought out, simplest narrative, easiest preproduction."
The premise is simple: it takes place immediately after the last Marie video, and the story is of Marie and Helena exploring the best way to milk Helena's studs to satisfy her cum-eating kink. They try a plethora of different FFM oral-sex combos, each of them have their own problems (guy takes too long to cum, Helena can't get to the guy in time, etc), before they finally settle on the guys wearing condoms while they fuck Marie's face, shooting their loads deep down her throat and pulling the balloon out for Helena to enjoy at her leisure.
Really all I need to do at this point is just storyboard out all the positions and figure out how long each would be to fit the 10-minute time limit. This one isn't terribly complex on the narrative front.
Futavee x Misty
This one is the exact opposite of the Goldilocks zone: while it is well-thought-out, it is horrifically complex and has a terrifying amount of preproduction required.
The core story takes place in 3 layered timelines: the "current time" layer is of Vee titfucking a bimbofied Misty, while she runs through the "flashback layer" which involves no less than seven different sex scenes with narrative scenes to match, serving to bridge the narrative gap between game and story*. And then the bottom-most layer, where the bulk of the actual story takes place, is exploring Vee's first time with Misty, where she basically immediately falls in love with Vee's thirteen inches and devotes herself to being Vee's personal fuck-toy.
*Specifically this story deviates shortly after Vik first tinkers with the implant in Vee's head and explains to her about the chip overwriting her personality and basically saying she's terminal. Where in the game Vee takes the news as a kick in the pants to get her life together and find a way to get the chip out, Vee in this story takes the news as a sign to give up and just enjoy life to the fullest. And for this Vee, that means lots of sex, and blowing basically every last eddie to her name on getting herself the biggest, fattest, most impressive (thanks Johnny) cock that money can buy her. And then fucking hookers with it. Lots of hookers. So many hookers. The aforementioned flashbacks sees Vee fucking ten hookers total across those 7 sex scenes. And that's explicitly seen on-screen.
I love the idea, of the whole batch it's probably my favorite. But it needs so much preproduction. I need to port over, wholesale Vee's apartment, Vik's clinic, and the seedy motel room you fuck Meredith in. Then I need to port over enough scene assets to build a reasonable tattoo parlor and apartment for Misty (with a rooftop view of Night City as a whole). Then I need to port over a bunch of hairs and outfits for the hookers (not going to port of character assets for them, that's just too much work for background characters - I'll use my Mass Effect Generic Females for the faces). And then to boot I need to port a handful of story characters as well, for narrative purposes.
It's just a lot of porting. And just Misty, by herself, was a technical nightmare to get out of Cyberpunk and into Source. I don't want to think about how much effort would go into porting the props, let alone entire scenes. It's work I want to do eventually, but it likely would take weeks, if not months, to port everything over. And I just don't want to spend all that time on this production. Cuz then it'll more like be a July video, or an August video. And I want a June video.
Alex Chen Cum Slut (Episode 1)
So this is a really fun one. I actually really like this one. It's well-thought-out, its preproduction isn't too heavy, and the story is just complex enough to be narratively engaging (in my opinion) but not so much so as to be overwhelming.
For those unfamiliar with Life is Strange True Colors (which I imagine is many of you), the protagonist character Alex Chen is an empath - she has the ability to read peoples' emotions, to feel them, and to even take them from others and into herself. In the game, the feelings she experiments with are anger, sadness, fear, and happiness.
This idea is predicated on the idea of adding a fifth emotion to the roster: horniness.
The core premise is that Alex discovers that she is able to mirror her partner's horniness, adding their horniness onto her own. She first discovers this while eating out her girlfriend, Steph: as Steph is getting super into it and getting close to orgasm, Alex suddenly finds herself "copying" Steph's horniness--resulting in her cumming before Steph, all from eating Steph out.
The story itself is split into two interwoven timelines: in the "current" timeline, Steph has become a full-time pimp, whoring out an eager Alex to entire scores of men on the cheap. Alex orgasms with every load that is blown in, on, or to her, and she's become utterly addicted to the sheer overwhelming sensations of gang bangs, taking on multiple peoples' horniness all at once and simply drowning herself in it. She is the perfect submissive cum dump, genuinely cum harder the more she is used.
In the "flashback" timeline, which is where the bulk majority of the story takes place, we see the journey that led from her and Steph being a two-piece lesbian folk rock band to the whore-and-pimp duo they end up as.
As I said, I really like this idea - if you can't tell from just how extra I've gone into building the slut-Alex version. And I'm not done inking her up yet.
Enter the Whoretex Club (Episode 1)
Of all the ideas on this list, this is my personal favorite. Its preproduction cost is a bit variable, depending on if I want to tease people with where the story will end or if I want to keep that a secret - frontloading takes a lot of asset work. It's thoroughly thought out, both series-wide and also for the first few episodes in particular.
However, it's also definitely the slowest-pace of all the ideas on this board. While not as narratively layered as the Cyberpunk idea, is it written very explicitly like a serial. The first episode has 3 unique sex scenes involved, but they are padded out in a narrative sequence that quickly reaches a 1:2 ratio of sex:narrative, meaning there is a lot more talking than there is fucking.
The premise for this series is an alternate ending to the first game which serves as a compromise between its two canon endings: Arcadia Bay isn't destroyed and its inhabitants aren't killed, but the town is severely damaged. Specifically, the Blackwell Campus is too damaged for classes to continue, and the school is closed indefinitely as they do not have the funds to repair it.
While Max and her friends devise ways to raise funds for the school, they discover that Queen Bitch Victoria has been using her exclusive Vortex Party club as a front for a prostitution ring, whoring out club members for quick and dirty cash.
After a failed attempt to blackmail Victoria into using her pimp money to fix the school, Max and the gang quickly come to the conclusion that if they can't convince Victoria to use that money to repair the school, then they're just going to have to beat her at their own game.
Overall the series is a fun romp, with each of the girls have their own interesting kinks to explore, and Victoria's team being a dark mirror of Max's in terms of both ethics and kinks. The story has its share of twists and turns, as alliances form and missions shift.
If I could choose any one idea to build with no consequence, no needing to obligate a viewerbase, I would probably pick this one. It has romance, it has drama, it has comedy, and it has a metric fuckton of steamy, slutty sex. Unfortunately, here in the real world, I have reservations that it might have too much romance, drama, and comedy to balance out the steamy, slutty sex for most people.
That won't stop me from storyboarding it out though and fielding it for interesting, though.
Triple Digit (Part 1)
This is an idea that I am extremely torn on. On the one hand, I absolutely love the idea of DVa being an eager little orgy-bunny. Just the idea of a rich pretty girl being utterly unashamed of her love for orgies is appealing to me, and I love just how extra this idea is.
However, it's that very same extra that makes me worry. I have ideas of a news broadcast at the orgy, complete with an on-scene reporter who interviews DVa while she's getting plowed. I'm imagining news-report cutaways to DVa's previous antics, from YouTube videos of her blowing a group of dudes at a club, to discussing how her latest mainstream film had an "uninterrupted one-shot twenty-minute sex scene". I'm talking an interview with the guy with the clicker whose keeping track of how many loads are blown in or on DVa, who admits he's just not interested in banging DVa and just really likes numbers. I'm thinking a whole on LAN party in the adjacent room, where guys talk about how they're just excited to play games as they are to bang DVa.
Like, this whole idea is so extra that DVa's orgy ends up becoming secondary to the video about DVa's orgy. The main draw of the story becomes the media sensation around DVa's orgy, how chill and normalized everything is, how the twenty-four-hour news is covering DVa taking a hundred dicks like a State of the Union address or some other the-nation-must-know phenomenon.
And I personally love that. It's patently absurd, and I absolutely love absurdism. This is the kind of shit I personally would pay money to watch.
But I also know that I am not most people. Most people don't have any interest in absurdism in their porn. They might tolerate a token absurdity for the setting, but an entire video dedicated to absurdism, just completely committing to the bit that the porn becomes second fiddle to it in a porn video?
I don't know, I think that'd be a hard sell. In terms of preproduction, there really isn't that much of a cost to it all - I mostly just have to write out all the interviews and figure out the pacing and what-not. I note that this would be a "Part 1", because I imagine that if I hit all of my ideas (including genuinely seeing all 100 loads get blown), then there is no way to feasibly fit all of that within a 10-minute video. And so it'd be purposely written out in such a way that rides the metatext full-boar, having the entire video that you the viewer watch being the video that's being broadcast on daytime television to homes all across the country - complete with ad breaks, which are conveniently 10 minutes apart. And so each part would end on a cut to commercial, and resume with a cut from commercial, keeping the absurdist contract in tact even across installments.
I love the idea, but I don't know if it's one I am brave enough to take on right now. Maybe one day, but I may have to do smaller absurdist projects first, test the waters, and work my way up to it.
Frozen Prequel
This is the first idea on this list that I really don't have a strong grip on story-wise.
The high-level premise is simply enough: a prequel to the Frozen on-stream video that I still have yet to make progress on*, focusing on the ladies first discovering the Curvy potions they use at the top of said video, and exploring how they came to be the eager cum-dumpsters we see there.
I have a very rough outline of how the story would unfold:
The ladies each secretly fantasize about being Curvy cum-dumpsters
They encounter a Curvy cum-dumpster witch who they envy (Anna openly, Elsa secretly)
The witch reveals that she is aware of their fantasies and offers them Curvy potions
They take the potions and have their first cum-dumpster experience, getting hooked on the experience.
The problem is that I don't have all the pieces figured out as to how that manifests. I have Elsa's secret fantasy pegged pretty squarely, as she writes self-insert smut-fic about a Curvy white-haired Queen (hmm who could that be) whose constrained and free-used by a gang of surly-yet-oddly-polite rogues.
But what would Anna's fantasy be? And then what would the ladies' first experiences be, which wouldn't be just an echo of the events of the actual video? And how would I fit all of this into ten minutes?
I'm not saying the idea can't or won't manifest. Just that I need to sit down and put a lot of thought into it. Which is what these next few weeks are for.
*The unprompted time away from my apartment fucked things up there - after this June video is done, I intend to take a week or two to focus on the Frozen on-stream video and get its progressed along, before returning to Overbreed.
Witcher Orgy (Part 1)
This is hands down the easiest, simplest, and quickest idea on this list to produce.
The premise is drop-dead simple: while Geralt is away, the girls fuck each others' brains out.
This would be completely unrelated to Primordium, and is actually an adaptation of a much older idea I am fairly certain I shared at one point here. Regardless, the story is basically non-existent. The entire video is just the girls cycling through a fuckton of different poses as they fuck each other.
The reason why this is a part one is because there are three concrete phases, each of which has nine unique positions. If you do the math, that's 27 unique poses in total, which is way too much to get through in a 10-minute video. And if you again do the math, 9 poses per phase, 1 minute per pose... throw in a little bit of narrative to tie it all together, and you get a nice and clean 10-minute video, perfect for a short.
The first phase is a purely lesbian orgy, focusing first on a three-pose round of two ladies not being pleasured (first three images), then a three-pose round of one lady not being pleasured (last image, plus two more poses), and finally a three-pose round of all the ladies being pleasured simultaneously (and let me tell you that was a bitch to figure out).
The second phase involves three rounds of one lady each being futanari, with one pose being the other two ladies both pleasuring the futanari (in example, Yen and Triss both licking Ciri's futa cock), and the other two poses in each round being the futa and one of the other ladies double-teaming the third lady in a Futa+Female x Female threesome.
The third phase would be rounds of two ladies each being futanari, with a similar construction. I'll be honest, I haven't gotten this far along as to fully figure out how many poses would be in the third phase. I figured it's so far in the future, I really don't need to worry about it right now.
But yeah, if I had a gun to my head and was forced to start making a video tomorrow, without being allowed to do a single drop of model-work or write a single word of preproduction, this is the one I'd pick. All the preproduction is already done, it's just a matter of animating it all.
Liziverse (Episode 2)
A bit of a surprise candidate, but not too much of a surprise. While Liziverse wasn't explicitly written to be sub-ten-minutes, the first episode fell into that category out of happenstance. And Liziverse is explicitly written to be anthological, allowing for very little continuity between episodes. And they're also designed to be pretty wide-open in terms of story and creativity. I mean, the first episode was all about stopping Fortnite from being made - the series didn't exactly set a high bar out the gate in terms of taking itself seriously.
Episode 2 takes that idea and runs with it. "What if Liz in a sexy catsuit getting fucked by a deathclaw?" is a real shitpost of an idea. So why not run with it?
The premise of this one is pretty straightforward: the Elizabeth Bureau gets an alert of a hyperintelligent Deathclaw in the Fallout universe that breaks free of an Enclave laboratory and breeds an entire cabal of similarly hyperintelligent Deathclaws, throwing the entire Fallout timeline into disarray. Agent Seven's job is simple: break into the lab, and neutralize the hyperintelligent Deathclaw before it can escape.
When assigning Seven the job, Two probably had in mind killing the Deathclaw, reverting its hyperintelligence, destroying the research, or straight-up destroying the lab. Of course, with Agent Seven being as cum-brained as she is, her first thought when she sees the hyperintelligent Deathclaw's twenty-inch cock is "Wow. I really shouldn't stick that penis in me... However," And after seeing how aroused the Deathclaw gets from her teasing it, and the brainwave display pretty prominently declaring "Breed human" over and over again, Seven lets her pussy do the thinking for her once again.
And once again, she ends up accomplishing the mission in the most sexual way possible. How do you stop a hyperintelligent Deathclaw from breeding a massive family of similarly intelligent Deathclaws? By getting it obsessed with (fruitlessly) breeding horny human monster-fuckers instead. Apparently.
A fun idea. A bit out there, but in all the right ways. Plus, I mean, it's Liz. In a catsuit. Who doesn't like Liz in a catsuit?
Ritual Breeding
This is another video I'm really torn on, though not for the same reasons as the DVa video.
The reason I'm torn on this one is, I just can't get it to a place where I am happy with it.
I have spent a lot of time and resources writing out my DOAFantasy universe, with a very intricately woven millennia-spanning lore that relates the 13 main DOAFantasy ladies together in a single sweeping grand adventure of huge tits and even bigger orgies.
The problem is that the idea is so grand, and so sweeping, and so intricate, that it has become nearly impenetrable from an outside perspective. I simply cannot find a way to on-ramp people into the story without absolutely massive amounts of exposition. And lore-dumping isn't good writing under the best of terms - it's catastrophic for porn, where the expectation is most people don't care and just want to get to the fucking already.
At its simplest level, Ritual Breeding has a simple premise: Momiji is part of a sex cult that worships a statue of the huge-tiddy sexy demon-lady Nyotengu. This cult believes that by fucking each others' brains out near the statue, then they'll eventually have kids who look like Nyotengu. The problem is that this hasn't worked out - Momiji is the first huge-tiddy woman the cult has had in nearly a hundred years.
Against the cult's wishes, Momiji went out into the modern world to go to college (and gain more knowledge), where she learned about the radical concept of genetics. She returned to her cult with a profound new idea: if the cult wants more women with huge tiddies, they should breed the woman among them with huge tiddies. Namely, they should all breed her. All at once. Passionately.
It's a simple enough premise. The problem is how do I express that diegetically in a way that doesn't take several minutes of non-stop talking to explain? I've written and rewritten and rewritten this particular project a half-dozen times, and I just cannot find a good way to do it.
I really want to kickstart this DOAFantasy universe, and Momiji is the best place to start, because it immediately introduces the Nyotengu artifact (which is magical and core to the entire story) and hints at its power (and how fickle that power is) without getting too lost in the bushes about the millennia-long lore behind Nyotengu and the artifact and its impact on the world over the centuries.
But the problem is it keeps getting lost in the bushes of setting up its own simple premise.
So I need to tinker with it more. I like the idea. I like big tiddies. I like breeding (if you couldn't tell from my main project being an hour-long project called Overbreed).
Sherbecca (Episode 1)
This is a super old idea of mine, that would be a perfect candidate for these short videos. It is a project where the story takes a back seat to the characters. There's not too much preproduction needed - the writing is mostly already figured out for the first few episodes, it's mostly just model-work that needs to be done (as you can tell by Sherry's clipping outfit). Wouldn't take more than a few days to get it ready for production, really.
But for posterity, the story itself is relatively simple: a new suspected BOW has been discovered in the wild, with a rather unique and peculiar life-cycle. First, the infected develop a massively engorged penis - men have their existing organ modified, while women have one grow from their clitoris organ. Soon after, they develop an inexhaustible libido and sexual stamina to match. Eventually, the life-cycle of the infected always ends the same: the patient ends up fucking themselves to death, dehydrating themselves either from the exertion of sex, from ejaculating so much semen it drains their bodies of water, or from their hearts simply giving out from the exertion.
The origins of the infection, designated the D-virus (bet you can't guess why), are as-yet-unknown, nor is the extent of the infection. But Sherry, leading an team of DSO operatives, is determined to find everything she can and put a stop to it before it has a chance to cause any more damage than it already has. Core to her efforts is recruiting Doctor Rebecca Chambers, a prodigy of biochemistry and the forefront researcher on bioterror weapons. Their clashing personalities very quickly causes... complications with their team dynamics, however.
As I said, this series is much more a focus on the characters. Specifically, Sherry and Rebecca are very much written to be foils to one another. Sherry is extremely open with her sexuality; Rebecca is very private and doesn't like to talk pleasure. Sherry is in an open but deeply committed relationship with the five members of her team; Rebecca is afraid of romantic commitment and prefers casual sex with strangers over developing relationships. Sherry is a submissive top, ensuring her partner's needs and desires are fully taken care of in any way she can manage, while taking the initiative herself and not wanting her partner to overexert themselves; Rebecca is a dominant bottom, focusing purely on her own sexual needs, and directing others exactly on how to best to please her--their own pleasure is merely incidental to hers. Sherry is a dirty-talking chatterbox, swearing up a storm about how much she loves fucking her boys' thick hard dicks and how badly she wants their children; Rebecca nary says a word other than "harder" during sex, and has a pathological aversion to swearing even under the most tense of circumstances.
Indeed, the only things the two have in common is that they are both extremely hypersexual: The regenerative abilities the remittent G-virus imbued Sherry with leaves her indefatigably horny, regularly having sex with her boys for hours on end; Rebecca is a borderline-dysfunctional butt-slut, with a constant psychological need for anal sex, and physically incapable of functioning without getting through her work day wearing a vibrating butt-plug at all times.
The girls' radically difference approaches to sex makes cohabitation difficult, especially with them both being so hypersexual and such constantly seeking release from their cravings. But friction is where drama and comedy both erupt in spades.
As I said, it's a very old idea of mine, but one that has never left my mind ever since I first composed it. It's evolved and changed a lot over the years, but the central pillars have largely remained unchanged. I'd love to see it finally get made.
Conclusion
And that's it!
That's all eleven of the ideas I have that are vying for my attention for the June video, and my thoughts on them.
What all ideas do you like most? What do you like least? And perhaps most importantly, what ideas do you think I should make for June, as the best combination of "not too much preproduction needed" and "I like the idea"?
Please share your thoughts, as I spend the next week or two hammering all of these ideas out as best I can, and start coming to my own conclusions.
Until next week, everyone!