Page 83 WiP (Girls in the Hall part 2) (Patreon)

So earlier in the comic, Marvin was greeted by an assortment of beautiful and interested ladies in the school hallway. Well, this panel is a direct call-back to that earlier scene, only this time Marvin will be feeling a bit better about it than he was the first time.

I’m going for a crowded hallway here, but the space is limited… so I’m thinking a few nondescript figures to fill out the background should be enough, and then I’ll be moving on the tones and dialog.

Speaking of the dialog, I’m not sure it’ll work the way I want or if it’ll just be a distraction... My intention was to just fill the hall with pretty girls, but I ended up turning it into a bit of a scene. Well, hopefully it’ll be humorous enough in the end (you can probably guess what a few of them are saying).

Pretty satisfied with the character on the right side as well, and I have a feeling she’ll look even better once I’ve got all the tones applied.