The Fluffer - Page 5 (Patreon)

In which a fox goes to get a bottle of water. Exciting page!

Looking back at it now, I wish I hadn't added that stutter to the fennec's speech in the first panel. It makes him look kind of timid which isn't really what I wanted- I wanted more of a "Aw, man, c'mon" feeling. Didn't quite nail it, but he's not supposed to be a super meek character or anything. 

Unfortunately I'm a traditional artist and can't do shit about it now, so we'll all just have to live with it. x3

Also the door slamming shut didn't really work out on paper like it did in my head. I really have to go and look at some other comics sometime to get a better feel for how to add impact to motion. 

On the plus side, I really like how the fennec came out in that second panel. Lookit his cute little fennec face!

Anyway, just my thoughts on this one. 

Not the most exciting of pages but I hope y'all like it anyway, and as always I'd be happy to hear any thoughts you may have!