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 So! I'm working on a new thing! 

For a while now I've been saying I want to make a new comic with a hypnosis or mind control theme. This is not that comic, hah. I find myself struggling a bit with the writing side of that comic- I've got a basic outline that seems to work but I'm struggling to get the details into a place that I like. But I don't want to faff about with writing forever, I wanna draw smut! So here's an alternative idea that's been kicking around my head for a while that should be pretty simple. 

Short, stupid and filthy. Should hopefully be fun!

I tried out a slightly different method of colouring for this one, and I think it worked out well- it's pretty simple and low detail, which makes it a pretty snappy way method for colouring comics so it doesn't take all day. A few highlights here and there keep it from feeling too flat- I think it's working nicely! I also experimented a bit with some different paper. Makes things look a little grainy but the effect isn't entirely unpleasant. 

I'd love to hear what y'all think so far! 

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Taki Kuroi

That final expression is so great. :D I am here for this comic.

James Dawes

Agreed It looks great and I'm looking forward to seeing the whole thing.

Anonymous

Predictable porn comic names: "Office Politics", assumes it's an office based on the shirt and tie. "Warehouse Audit", assumes horse = warehouse worker?. "Performance Review", "Oral Presentation", "Office Meating". I think that's all I got right now.

Bloudin Ruo

I think the combination of the quicker coloring technique and grainier paper will work well together; any small issues with the color will be hidden underneath the texture, and I think the texture itself is a fine addition too. However, fluids may need some extra definition since the texture of the paper overpowers the delicateness of how you usually do them (as I think is demonstrated well in panel #2 and #5). Maybe since it is only saliva and pre (for now!), clear liquids, it makes it seem that way, but it's just my 2c! But my god Ru, panels #5, #6 and #7 are just heavenly. I can practically put myself right in the little guy's shoes the page is so well done!

ruaidri

I have a title in mind, to be honest, I just didn't want to use it quite yet to ruin the cold start the comic is going for. I'll add it in when the next finished page goes up!

ruaidri

I have a bit of a bad habit of making all the fluids I draw look like cum, so I tried to fix that here. It's possible I overcorrected and didn't make them visible enough. I'll see if I can fix that up next time it comes up! Thaaanks. :D