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Everything begins to go pear-shaped as Mildred finds her stranger has a very strange power... will she survive this maelstrom of male strength?  KEEP FROSTY AND READ!

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Serra Britt

This story is cracking me up XD Also in page 2, I think instead of "hoards" it's meant to be "hordes". Possibly also a missing space in page 4 between "at least"?

InSecurity

(Mr. H) I suck at editing, because I grow b Lind to my own dialog. Editing others' stuff is easier, because I am not blind or uncritical. I also missed USEFULL on the end litany before the spoiler.

Jeremy Roberson

I'm not sure if it's just me but I'm having trouble viewing with clarity. It seems like it's pixelated when blown up to be able to read it