Replacing the placeholder dialogues from the previous build... (Patreon)

Hey Guys,

Lately I've been replacing a lot of the dialogues in the game. If you guys played the latest build you would've noticed that I added many transition stories to put the whole story into a better chronological order. And as I was doing that, I put it into notes on whichever dialogues that needs to be improved.

The first immediate sexy dialogues that I've fixed (and will be available in this month's update are):

1. The Lirieth Dungeon (The sexy BDSM scenes when you enter her dungeon the second time). I had a hard time to make a good story of this scene, and need to research a lot of femdom literatures and BDSM kink to get the feel of it.

2. The Private room dialogues (I'll show you guys the script soon once it's finished)

3. If time permits, I wish I can fix the library text too this month.

Note : This script is not 100% finished and I might wanna change some lines a bit later..

I hope you enjoy the script, let me know your opinion in the comment below, or if you have something you'd like to add/change.

Lirieth Dungeon

Key: “H” means Heidi “L” means Lirieth

Whip

“Crack! Lirieth’s whip lands on your skin, overwhelming you with pain.”

H: “Ah! C-Couldn’t you be a little less harsh?” “You feel her hand on your ass, she’s disregarded your please.”

L: “You have such a round, perfect ass.”

“Crack!”

H: “Ow, fuck!”

“Crack!”

H: “Ungh!”

L: “You sure you don’t want a piece of this? I promise the pain will, well, it’ll be less harsh at least.”

“Crack! You do your best to focus on her face through the pain, but your eyes are drawn to her supple chest. She laughs.”

L: “Face slapping, pussy slapping, spanking, hair pulling, nothing as bad as whipping.” “Crack!”

L: “Tell me slut, who is your mistress!?”

“Crack!”

H: “Ah, fuck! You are, you are!”

H: “(Why is this making me so wet, she’s so hot, I can’t help it.)”

“Your eyes focus on her perfect ass as she circles around you. She notices and cracks the whip across your face, walking over to you and lifting your face to look at her.”

L: “My eyes are up here, slut.”

H: “Yes mistress.” “Crack! The whip lands on your ass, and then again on your pussy. The pain is insane, but the pleasure is even more so. You can’t believe how much you want to cum after your pussy has been whipped.”

H: “Shit that feels so good, mistress~!”

L: “Oh does it now? How interesting.”

“She continues her onslaught of whipping, leaving your ass and pussy bright red.”

H: “Fuck I’m gonna cu~”

“Another whip crack lands right on your clit and sends you over the edge. Your body spasms and shakes, as earthquakes of pleasure and pain overwhelm you.”

H: “Ow ow fuck yes that feels so good!”

“Lirieth stands in front of you, dropping her whip.”

L: “I think I’m done with you, for now, whore.”

H: “Yes mistress, thank you for the whipping~”

Dildo in Vagina

“With just the gentle prodding of the dildo against your slick pussy lips, you can feel how massively thick it is. Lirieth slowly pushes it into your tight hole, struggling to even get past the tip, luckily, your slickness makes it a little less miserable.”

H: “Ah, fuck, it’s too big!”

L: “Too big? No such thing, you are very tight though!” “She pushes the dildo in a little further.”

H: “Fuuuuck!”

L: “I can make anything fit, even in your stupid little hole!”

H: “Yes, mistress, it’s a stupid little innocent hole..~”

H: “(The way she talks to me makes me so wet.)”

L: “An innocent hole? No such thing as that either. I’ll show you just how dirty your hole is, by making it cum from this pain!”

“She slams the entire length of the cock into your whole, causing so much pain and pleasure that your vision blurs. You scream out as she begins fucking you hard with the dildo, causing your body to tremor with each thrust.”

H: “O-Oh shit, mistress, I’m gonna~”

L: “Do it slut, cum for me!” H: “Ahhh~! Fuck yes~!”

“Your body is wracked by the most intense orgasm, leaving you a quivering mess

Dildo in Ass

“Mistress Lirieth isn’t nice with her action as she forces the tip of the dildo into your ass, the only lubrication is the slickness from your pussy.”

H: “Oh fuck, mistress, please be careful, it hurts so much~!”

L: “Well that’s only because you’ve been misusing your hole, what is this hole for?”

“She begins slowly forcing more into you, the sensation of it filling you up is intense.”

H: “I-I don’t know mistress~”

L: “I know you’re a stupid little slut, but you can do better than that!”

“She pops the dildo out and then slams it back in, stopping halfway.”

H: “Ungh~! It’s a hole for cocks, that’s what it’s meant for mistress~!”

L: “Correct, you dumb little whore~!”

“She begins fucking your ass with the dildo, gently rubbing your clit.”

H: “Fuck yes mistress, please punish my little whore hole~!”

“You can already feel a climax approaching as your ass is filled with each thrust. Your gasping for breath and spasming each time the dildo reaches the end of your tunnels.”

L: “Come on girl, you should have cum by now, you already worn out!?”

“She slaps your clit, causing you to shout. She slams on final time, forcing the entire length of the dildo into you. The sensation of being filled and slapped sends you over the edge.”

H: “I’m so sorry, I’m cumming~!”

“You clench your ass around the dildo, holding it in your ass as you shake and squirm. Shouts of pleasure fill the dungeon as you cum. You are left, hanging there exhausted, as you finish cumming.”

L: “Good girl.”

H: “Th-Thank you, mistress~”

Cheers,

Celeng