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This is more roughly edited than the last one. I'm not a fan of how I lit myself here. Harsh, close, side lighting increases texture and not much light is getting into my eyes. There's some mic knocking too that I may or may not be able to remove. And I'll have to revisit grading later.  I might add some pitched down inaudible whispering from my friend in the back. The end is supposed to become a bit intense with the shrunken head talking but haven't done it yet.  I also linger a little too long on the left.

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Terry

Gah! Even your drafts are Perfection!

wattmill

This is enjoyable. I kept expecting more heart sinking feelings in the pit of my stomach. Like, I got the job? That was easy. And all there is in the dungeon is a couple of pokey sticks? Also, 20:48, did anyone else see a flash of judgemental eyes at the bottom of the screen? >,>

Anonymous

Perfect as always!! I think the inaudible whispers would definitely be complimentary too!

Anonymous

The ending was the cherry on top. I've got my trash bag ready.

Smashterson

This was a particularly good one! It has somewhat similar vibes to the face touching one from a few months back, but with a slight dash of mortal peril. In terms of your concerns, I didn't have any complaints about the lighting personally, though I could sort of see what you meant about the light getting into your eyes when the angles lined up correctly. It does look a bit better, but personally I don't think it'd warrant a whole reshoot or anything. I think the whispering from the head would be a good addition, especially as you said, to build up the intensity at the end right before the little lighthearted bit as it finishes All in all, I liked it! Very good work, regardless of being a draft.

Anonymous

I really loved this video! Lots of tingles, great sound quality. It looks very good too, although the lighting is not perfect as you pointed out. Not a huge deal though.