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Ok so... after a lot of thought, I am going to keep on posting animation previews as I have been. The truth is, I really appreciate the feedback and it helps me out a lot when people point out things that do not look right and provide ideas on how to improve a scene. I do not have a boss, a co-worker, or anyone else to run these by and I really enjoy having the extra eyes and minds to produce these animations.

Direct Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/q5nog1fyggxthu2/Scene4.mp4?dl=0

I 100% understand that doing this can take away some of the fun of watching the final animations for the first time but if you feel that way, I would recommend to skip most of these previews and just watch them occasionally. I hope everyone is ok with this and that I understand both sides of this but I feel like I have to do what will help the animations the most for now. Maybe one day when I am better than I am now, I wont need as much feedback but right now, I find it incredibly valuable.

As always, please take a look and let me know what needs to be worked on here =) I think the timing is just a little off personally but it could just be because my brain is a little fried from today.

 All My Roomates Love 4.5 - Animation 13% Completed

  • Scene 1 - (Done)
  • Scene 2 - (Done)
  • Scene 3 - 790-880 = (Need Render) Bella,"But Mary..."
  • Scene 4 - 890-1025 = (Need Render) Mary,"I said now Bella."
  • Scene 5 - Bella,"Yes Mary (sad walk)
  • Scene 6 - Mary,"Sweetie, open up for mommies cock"
  • Scene 7 - Maggie,"OK!" + Maggie getting into position
  • Scene 8 - Mary starts pushing her cock into Maggie's mouth
  • More to come, will update when I get closer to this part.

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Scene4.mp4

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Comments

Erica

All I can say it looks good for an unfinished product and I like Mary's movement. But I know nothing about animation, so couldn't give any detailed feedback.

Anonymous

Love the way she said it

AgentRedGirl

Dropbox is being a little weird so if it stutters you may have to download it to view it

William Cramer

Oh my Lord in heaven, how do you argue with Mary???? She makes her point very clear!

Ciarán M

Firstly, I definitely appreciate tou carrying on with your current output of previews and updates. I really enjoy being able to give you feedback and trying to be helpful in whatever way that I can 😸. Now, as for this scene... Oh boy, there is something so very intimidating about Mary here 😅. The slow and deliberate way that she turns to face Bella, lowering down and making the difference in height very clear as she looks her right in the eyes all feel so domineering, you did a great job in getting across her commanding presence 😸. The voice actress too did a wonderful job in portraying Mary's commanding tone. As for other details, I like the subtle changes of Bella's expressions, smiling expectantly at first, hopeful that Mary has changed her mind before being left disappointed. You convey the characters feelings very well with their faces (Oh, I just wish that Bella could get a hug at this point, the poor girl needs a cuddle). And I like that throughout this exchange, Mary has this smile that is somehow more intimidating than an angry glare 😅. Oh and another little fun detail is how Mary's monster cock knocks Bella's around when she turns. And I must say, Mary does also look very sexy in the final seconds with her back so strongly arched, equally voluptuous breasts and butt each protruding forth while she remains rock hard. Bella looks so demure too with how she's holding her hands together nervously and oh god.. her last expression... won't someone please give her a hug! Hell, I'll do it! 😸 Seriously though, great job again here, Red! 👏👏👏👏👏 I can't see anything wrong here and I love the slow pace of Mary's movements.

Ciarán M

Oh, if I may, I do have a suggestion but this is more for the next scene as Bella walks away sadly. Now I don't know what angles we'll be viewing her from and you've likely already thought of this, but I think it would fit well if Bella's cock starts to go flaccid as she walks away, a physical reflection of her deflated mood... well, another sign aside from her expression of course 😅😂.

bigwiggy

I agree that previews are good, and it's an easy solution anyway as if someone doesn't want to see them then all they have to do is not look at them. Have you decided if Bella is going to do her "revenge" thing?

Lero7

I love the work! Just curious but what is the average time to build one of these videos?

bobby stronzheim

Keep truckin' Red, glad you've decided to keep posting previews and tweak as needed, it feels better to communicate imo. As for the scene, if anything you could try delaying it even a little longer after they touch tips (or have her turn faster and go that route idk) looks good to me though, I like how you have Mary and Bella touch, just some fun futa interactions

AgentRedGirl

Heya Lero... so, it has been taking me around 3-4 months but I just made some huge upgrade to my rendering engines so I am hoping to speed things up SIGNIFICANTLY. At least cutting that time in half.