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AML4 Alternative Script Poll + AML3 Final Rendering at 98% (Patreon)

Published:
2018-08-20 15:28:02
Imported:
2020-10

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Heya all. Just wanted to let you know that the AML3 rendering is going well. There is about 48 hours of rendering left for the final scene =) I believe it will be ready for release on the 23rd or 24th!

Also, below is an "alternative" version of the AML4 script that focuses more on pleasing Mary, rather than punishing Bella. Let me know your thoughts and vote below. This will be the last big discussion about the AML4 script. I just want to get this right and at least present an alternative option for your review.

While I like the original Mary hyper dom idea, I really like how this alternative idea is about bringing them all together. Let me know what you think.

Here is a link to the original script for reference (I made a few minor changes to the original as well): https://www.patreon.com/posts/aml4-script-20823030

AML4 Script Alternate:

Intro: [Mary is sitting on the bed with a huge erection, her face in her palms, looking upset/sad]

Bella: Mary... Mary, please say something.

Mary: [sigh] I am just frustrated Bella.

Bella: I know Mary Im,sorry. It was just my first time being inside a girl...

Mary: Whatever, lets just go to bed. I am not even hard anymore.

Bella: No no no... Mary please. What can I do?

Maggie: I can help mommy.

Bella: Yeah! [Bella thinks for a second] Maggie come here... stick your ass out.

Maggie: Umm... ok

[Bella begins licking and sucking on Maggies ass, Mary looks mildly interested]

Bella: [Whispering loudly] Push my cum out Maggie.

[Maggie pushes and cum leaks out of her butt and some shoots all over Bellas face. Mary is watching and starting to tug on her balls/cock]

Bella: Do you like watching me eat my own cum Mary?

Mary: Yes baby... play with her some more.

Maggie: [awkwardly] Umm... I need to go pee real quick

[Bella looks at Mary whos cock is getting harder now. She lets out a little sign]

Bella: Pee in my mouth sweetie. Help me wash down some of this cum.

Maggie: What? Like, pee on your face???

[Bella hesitates a little, Mary is sitting up now, rock hard]

Bella: Yes sweetie... clean my dirty little face off with your piss [Bella is looking at Mary as she says this]

Maggie: WHOA. OK! Heck yes!

[Maggie stands over Bella. Bella takes her eyes off of Mary and stares up into Maggies eyes]

Bella: Come on sweetie, give it to me.

[Maggie starts to pees all over Bellas face, in her mouth, etc. Bella doesnt look super happy but tries to smile a little for Marys sake]

Bella: Mmm thank you for the shower sweetie... 

Mary: Cum on her cock Bella

[Bella stands up and kisses Maggie, and starts stroking her and Maggies cock at the same time. While making out, Bella cums on Maggies cock]

Mary: Oh god... [Mary is stroking her cock fast now]. 

[Bella opens her mouth to talk but Maggie interupts]

Maggie: Do you wanna do ME in this butt mommy?

Mary: Yes sweetie mommy would love that!

[Bella looks a little annoyed and worried]

Bella: You should fuck her in the mouth Mary! [Bella nudges Maggie]

Maggie: Oh umm... ok, yeah, do you want to do that?

Mary: Ok sweetie mommy just needs to cum.

[Mary throat fucks Maggie hard]

Bella: Just relax sweetie, its ok, just relax. 

[Bella gets down and starts eating Marys ass]

Mary: Oh fuck... that feels so good. You're doing good sweetie. Oh this feels so much better than your ass does Bella. Oh shit, oh shit, oh, im.... cum... cumming! 

[Maggie is visibly choking and coughing up cum. She looks a little "drunk" due to the lack of oxygen. Mary looks a little guilty as she looks at Maggie]

Mary: Sweetie, are you ok?

Maggie: Yeah [Maggie coughs up some more cum].

Bella: Do you want some water Maggie?

Maggie: No I think I am ok.

Mary: Oh... Sweetie you are so hard again... 

Maggie: Huh? Oh yeah...

Mary: [Puts her hand on Maggies shoulder] Do you want to fuck Bella's ass sweetie?

Maggie: Umm... well... its my first time, I kinda would like it to be with you. [Bella looks even unhappy]

[Mary pauses and thinks for a second]

[Bella smirks to herself]

Mary: Yes, yes of course sweetie. I'd love that =)

[Bella looks stunned WTF face]

[Mary bends over and spreads her ass] 

Mary: Here you go sweetie. Put your dick all the way up mommy's big fat ass.

[Maggie very nervously lines her cock up to Marys ass. Maggie takes a deep breath, puts her cock against Marys asshole, and slowly starts pushing herself inside Marys ass]

Mary: There you go sweetie, keep going.

[Maggie gets riggid, crosses her eyes a little, lets out a few loud moans, and shakes as she cums after getting about halfway inside Mary's ass]

[Bella giggles to herself]

[Maggie pulls out/sits down as cum leaks out of Mary's ass]

[Ending Sequence, Mary is asleep in bed with Bella and Maggie both lying in her arms, holding her - AML5 will pickup the next morning]

Comments

AgentRedGirl

OH as a note, Tara from the next series, Amys Big Wish, IS a super mean hyper dom. Most of her scenes will have some form of abusive domination for those who really want to see that.

Larry Berner

Can we get more vaginal scenes please? With all the anal they do they might as well be newhalf instead of futanari.

AgentRedGirl
>>14810893

Well, part 5 will be more focused on vaginal sex. This part is mainly about the "face fucking" scene. The anal scene here is really short. In part 5, Maggie, Bella, and Mary will all get vaginal cumshots (kinda the big "ending" to the AML series).

Ciarán M

Oh I like this one a whole lot more than the Punished version, the progression with Bella trying to work out how to please Mary, coaxing her back with Mary starting to regain her mood is so sexy to me 😄. From reading this new script, the part that I like the most is Bella jerking her and Maggie's cocks together, with the background description of Mary's own pace in stroking herself quickening 😍😍😍. But wow, Mary, really throwing Bella under the bus with this line "Oh this feels so much better than your ass does Bella" I get the feeling that Bella is very much concerned about Mary perhaps starting to prefer Maggie to her so that line has got to be a blow to her ego 😂. Being serious though, like I said, I much prefer this version of the scenario, to me it's a lot more fun, playful and sexy. And I'm definitely looking forward to the end of the week now with this announcement of AML3's potential release date 😄

Herrz

SERIOUSLY ITS A FUTANARI MOVIE I DONT CARE ABOUT ASHOLE FUCKIN IF THERE IS A PUSSY

glrider

I think this is the better path to take. It's more "positive" and growth oriented, instead of domineering. I think if you remove "Oh this feels so much better than your ass does Bella.".. just remove it entirely, that part of the script will flow smoother. Give it a read without that statement, and I think you'll agree. That sentence really slows down the pace of the dialogue around it.

Cwolf

Damn it I like both! Lol

Futanari Fan

Hi Agent Red This version is so, so much better than your original proposal. And I’m really pleased to see that you have taken into count many of the suggestions I made. Thank you. Also I have to say that you are a ‘brave’ creative. It’s not easy to expose ideas to criticism and even harder to back track when you get some negative feedback. So many congratulations. And of course I and all of us, can’t wait to see AML3.

Ciarán M
>>14816632

You know, that's an excellent point that I hadn't considered, that as a creator, that it is difficult to open oneself and ones ideas to criticism like Red has done here. Props and a thank you indeed to Red for this and for also taking that criticism on board. I myself did in a previous post say that I didn't mind the more harsh Mary that was initially proposed, but now that I've seen this script revision, I am so much more enthusiastic for it. So a thank you to Red and yourself, Futanari Fan, since we now have this new and improved version of AML4 to look forward to 😄 (I hope you don't mind me sticking my oar in, as it were, with my response 😅, but I liked your comment here quite a bit)

Futanari Fan
>>14816632

Really happy for you to stick your oar in. I read your comments and I'm always impressed by the detail of your observation and the rationale behind your critiques. So I take it s a compliment that you like my comment. I guess we should maintain our dialogue if you are willing.

Futanari Fan
>>14810388

That is what I have always liked about the ABW idea - lots of characters, lots of possible intereactions some of which will appeal more to some than others but plenty of room for manouvre and dipping in and out into characters and miniplots that you might like. And of course the possibility of widening your taste without committing to any one particular fetish or preference.

Erica

Damn, you really had to make me like the first scene then make one I like better. Great job. Although I I like the Dom mommy fetish, (and wouldn't mind it) this one is better, I think. Please never stop this great work😊

Ciarán M
>>14816632

Thank you very much, I really appreciate that 😄. I generally consider my comments to be inane ramblings so I'm always happy to hear it whenever people like them. Yeah, I'm more than happy to carry on talking with you.

Spaz strike

I love both, whatever you decide ill be happy with :)

Sgt Mac

I Will Say This Kid! I Looked At The Polls, The Last I Checked, A Newer Version Was Not Needed! But Now, It Is Soft And Cuddly Again, Guess I Missed Something Along The Way. Like I Said In The Beginning , This Is Your Creation. You Will Take It Where You Want It To Go! I Think With Everyone Wanting The Hugs And Kisses. A Family Affair Might Be A Little More Appropriate Title, And Make It PG 13! Good Luck Red--I Mean That! I Am Sure It Will Turn Out Fine. Just Remember ,Do Not Let Compromise ,Overshadow Your Creation, Your Ideas Are Just As Important!--SGT MAC

Shadow Kosmos

I like both Agent Red, so whichever one you prefer, go with it. Though I will say since you said above you have another character later that's a dom, I'm cool with keeping it more... "loving and nice" for AML. But like I said, either way is cool with me. I just love your work regardless. Lol Can't tell you how many times I've watched 2 and how much I'm looking forward to 3. Lol. But I digress.

Terry

Hi Agent Red Girl! Love the new script! I’m hoping the pee scene is nice and long 🙈

Terry

would love to see a long release then a little pause followed by a little finish stream 😊

Terry

In some future script would also love to see a Mary (or other character) do a really nice self suck scene. I keep imagining Mary with the Fleshlight scene you made then at the end tossing the Fleshlight and going into a beautiful self suck scene, gushing a big load in her own mouth, seeing it gush out of her lips and drip down her beautiful cock. 😊

Ciarán M
>>14835285

Good god... what you have just described here is now something that I simply must have 😍😍😍. Here's hoping that we do get to see such a scene.

Terry

Hahaha so glad you liked it!