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AML4 Script Thoughts (Patreon)

Published:
2018-08-19 18:31:09
Imported:
2020-10

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Heya all. Just an FYI the final AML3 scene is about 1/3 done rendering. I will be able to post the full AML3 video later this week!

As far as AML4 goes, before I send off the script for voice acting, I wanted to get some things ironed out so, let me know your thoughts.

Link to AML4 script "rough draft" https://www.patreon.com/posts/aml4-script-20823030

Before you vote though, please consider this: Personally, I wanted Mary to be a little mean to Bella & Maggie here. However, I do plan to have AML5 to be a little more "tender". I want to practice various things so I am trying to offer up a range of themes in this AML series before I move onto the next series. I know I cant make everyone happy with the AML series but I do listen and read everything posted and so I wanted to put up this poll and to let everyone know that and get some final majority thoughts.

Comments

Ciarán M

Initially I did think that Mary was being a bit too harsh, however I have changed my mind after reading your explanations for it, that Bella does something in AML3 to warrant punishment 😉, and that the plan is for AML5 to be more tender as well as your desire for each scene to have some variety. So I'm rather interested in seeing how the vote does end up, as well as seeing how the final script is l. And of course, I'm super eager to see AML3, I simply have to see Bella in action 😉😍😍😍

Futanari Fan

As I wrote previously I think the script is going in the wrong direction and out of tune with the way the characters related to one another in AML 1 and 2 and from what we have seen of them so far in AML3 - especially to opening image of the three together. Mutual enjoyment of each other as only futanari can without harshness should be the guiding principle - so I've voted for starting over.

Anonymous

I enjoy the more dominating nature kind of a family hierarchy I think you're going the right direction.

William Cramer

I agree with Erik. It's becoming apparent that Mary is showing signs that she is a strong and dominant force to be reckoned with- not only just a gentle maternal type. Just another facet of her amazing personality.

Erica

A mean milf/mother figure? Yes please!

Sgt Mac

Time To Practice Them Boots(Challenge You Will Conquer) Imagine How Tall And Domineering She Will Be?? Fetish Gear, To Boot!(Excuse The Pun) Sometimes Dealing With Young Ladies Can Really Get On A Mothers Nerves. Of Course They Are A Loving Family, But Mary Needs To Let The Bitch Out Now And Then! Love The Attitude, You Are Progressing In. Enjoy Reading Between The Lines. Keep Up The Outstanding Work RED! Respectfully Submitted, As Always--Sgt-Mac

Matthew Speidel

I will always argue for sweetness and tenderness; I think it juxtaposes much better with whatever kinky stuff is going on, and is far sexier. Besides, not having seen AML3 yet, Mary seems dominant but very loving. Perhaps I'm just seeing what I want to see. *shrug*

Futanari Fan
>>14790643

Really agree with you Matthew. Sadly looks like it is going in the wrong direction. All sorts of possibilities in Amy's Big Wish which has a much wider range of characters but this direction for Mary, Maggie and Bella just doesn't work for me.

AgentRedGirl

Let me put a little thought into this. I had another idea that is more about pleasing Mary and less about Bella being humiliated. I will put up both to a final vote.

glrider

My original opinion still stands. It's a great scene, and I want to see it someday, just not with these characters. Not at this point in their lives. This story started out as a "coming of age" story, and I think it should stay that way. A different story; "Mary hitting a nightclub and hooking up with Futanari's her age" would be a fun series too. Maybe for a future project.

SFM admirer

Reading the script Im just gonna throw an idea out there for consideration after the part where maggie is sucking mary off and choking maybe we find out at that point that maggie is a grower and not a shower and her cock starts growing bigger (typically dont like hyperfuta stuff but a grower not a shower within reason) maggie grows to comparable size to mary and thats when maggies gets to plow marys ass with a bigger dick and giving mary more of a new experience.

glrider
>>14792574

That sounds interesting. If you could only get one and only one story point across, what would it be? That should drive the rest of the story points.

Futanari Fan
>>14792574

I think you have a good way forward here Agent Red. How Mary might be pleased without her dominating either Maggie or Bella and without Bella being humiliated or punished is much more interesting as it could involve Maggie and Bella offering variouis sexual services to Mary which she could accept, reject or suggest modification. Much more possibilities here IMHO.

NicknamedBefore

How old is Maggie again? I mean, "...I have to go pee pee..." just seems to be a little too childish, but thats just my opinion. Other than that I like it, glad to here Mary won't stay in dom mode not that thats a bad thing.

Aaron Graham

I like it, and look forward to it. I will admit I hope in a future episode latex of some sort is included.