GIRLS WHO FIGHT First Draft (Patreon)

Oh wow hoo boy I am SUPER nervous to share this with you but, here we go ;;;

Please bear in mind that this is just a first draft and there's a *lot* that needs fixing (there's a whole notes section at the end where I bullet point a bunch of stuff I want to improve) but the idea is there! Literally none of this is final at this stage so some of the dialogue is a bit cheesy and will be refined later :3

Also, this is a *long* read. The whole document is about 55 pages. It's comprised of a detailed plot beat sheet, character bios and a bunch of worldbuilding (a lot of it is stuff that hasn't made it into this draft but I want to work it into future versions).

If you read it, let me know what you think! Comments are enabled so if you wanna leave any annotations go ahead haha 

Without further ado, here it is:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_iJypN9n8Pw4q4qNiyCIieK3bqRNdw9aNMo532fWblc/edit?usp=sharing

I'm really glad that I've actually managed to even get this far. As I said, there are a lot of flaws with this draft but I'm so happy to finally have something written down that I can show people, and I'm really glad to have something I can edit now rather than being stuck. Hooray!

I hope you like it haha ;;;