Faith, Draft 1, 1 5, outline, CH 14 (Patreon)

Faith in the Family, Commentary, CH 14

Where Thomas had to work hard to make it out of the Sigma Theta Gamma House so he can go to his parents for the long thanksgiving weekend

Very little changes between what I wrote and Ben’s version. He added characters I’d forgotten about, tweaked scenes, nothing worth taking about.

But one thing I realized once I was done writing the chapter was that in 14 chapters I never bothered looking at the map of Minneapolis/St-Paul and discovered that with Thomas living on the west side and the university right next to the I94, there was no reasons for me to send them along the I694. I also realized how ‘small’ Minneapolis and St-Paul proper are. In my mind the two encompassed the entirety of the space the I694/494 loop created. That’s fortunately easily fixed since the story takes place in 2050 or so. Between now and then, the two cities expanded a lot.

So that’s it on the comments, I hope you enjoy the file