Faith, Draft 1, 1 5, outline, CH 08 (Patreon)

Faith in the Family, Commentary, CH 8

In which Thomas’s sister visits the Sigma Theta Gamma frat house and ‘hilarity’ ensues.

This chapter was on the tougher side for me to start because of the visual logistic of what I wanted to happen compared to the physical space available. The layout of the house isn’t set in stone this early in the story, but I still have to made sure it feels like a house, even if it’s a large one.

Ben definitely raised the ‘personality’ of the characters involved. They are more dramatic than I prefer, but I will do my best to maintain some of it when I do draft 2.a

So that’s it on the comments, I hope you enjoy the file.

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