Unchaste - Chapter One - Visual Novel: (Patreon)

Hello everybody,

Right I've finally finished converting Chapter One of Unchaste into Ren'py to create some kind of VN. This is my first shot at this, so there might be some errors, but I've tried my hardest to make it feel a little bit different from just your bog standard VN. 

Really looking for some feedback on this, so feel free to comment or even DM me. Like I said it's my first time, so anything I can improve on would be great.

For those who have read the comic, there's only dialogue changes and BG music added, so it's up to you if you want to try it. I'd really love it if you did. 

Anyway, here's the link:

https://mega.nz/folder/e8NFSAzJ#SYoZyCElUUnhkgLxll7Xtg 

Thanks guys! Claire's Arc will be added soon to the VN and an update to Unchaste - Chapter Two next week!

EDIT: NEW VERSION WITH REVISED TEXT BOX ATTACHED TO LINK.