The Chronicles of Nimo - Chapter 1 - p20 (version noire) (Patreon)

The black & white version feels always more readable to me, maybe cause I'm not performing the colors myself. I still see the lack of special fx like the lights from the weapon, but I read them. Well, cause I'm the author, I guess, LOL!

Even if I worked hard on the poses & the bodies there, I love how the focus on the hands feels big too. Thanks to the hands play, the outcome is what it is.