I need short proofreading! (Closed) (Patreon)
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EDIT: Now I could proceed with revised text! Thank you for your viewing & helping~!
Hello my dear patrons!
Now I need short proofreading for English text, dialogue of Yumi (a girl in the left in the art above), a Gyaru heroine from my world.
Would you like to help me? I hope to make it more sophisticated English, also sounds like words from a young, slutty teen.
Hey Old Man , you like Gyaru Booty Dance like this, don't you?
To make our compensated date great, like, before your raw cumshot inside me, you should store your cum juice til your balls are full of it!
If you gimme more Money, I can give you naughtier dance...<3
Proofreading at Comments is welcome, also I'll check message system on Patreon too!
And if you had not read original comic, please visit this post~!
https://www.patreon.com/posts/all-6-pages-from-7140791
(You can get all 6 pages in English as $5 tier reward)