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Production: Trying out comic format (Patreon)

Published:
2017-11-27 21:55:30
Imported:
2020-08

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So with Unreal Desire's 3 production, I've been dabbling with formatting it in a manga/comic style over the usual images+wall ' text.

Sooo, here's a little sample! Whatcha think?


P.S. Also just keep in mind this is an addition to the regular production, the full images will still be available for more dedicated viewing. I just feel that adding a comic/manga element to the sets would give it a nice boost in the storytelling aspect.

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Anonymous

Maybe it's just cuz I read comics and manga but I really like it

Visha Oakwood

Hot but it feels like we are missing most of each scene

balloondolls
>>8532753

Well this is a close-up action sort of sequence, so the layout is pretty tight around what's happening. I'm aiming for different layouts and compositing to be used for more spacey takes, like (for example) half/full page (vertical panels), full spread (2 pages for one horizontal panel), and the like as well.

Anonymous

I have to agree with Skyshield, As good and stylish as it looks, we do see less of the action. And especially in scenes like this and those involving growth are best viewed in full page image sequences.

Anonymous

I do think it shows promise, and I really like the idea of the onomatopoeic comic style. It makes things SO much sexier. I do sort of hope we can get full res for some of the sections you use the action sequence for. Can't wait to see this!

Anonymous

Its very stylish and has a professional feel i would just hope you planned on including the full size images in a more traditional manner. So it could feel like more of an addition instead of feeling like we are missing out edges and pieces of the art. Also agree with the previous comments

balloondolls
>>8533274

I do agree with both of you on the viewing aspect. As Vinyl just actually commented while I was writing this, this isn't actually meant to fully replace the images per se, but provide a different venue of storytelling outside just images and then some paragraphs to accompany them. So, with that in mind, the full-res images will still be available, but the comic approach would be added for an easier to peruse piece ^^

balloondolls
>>8533586

yes, and yes! The plan is for the comic format to be included as an extra single piece to peruse and enjoy the story, with the full res images available on the side.

balloondolls
>>8533661

Yep! Full images will still be included on the side :) actually let me just go ahead and make an addendum of that in the main post ^^;

Leslael

I must agree with all the previous ones. I prefer the whole pictures instead. But the sequence in form of comic is really good!! Nice job man!

anamoy

I hate those "slurp" sound effects, I've seen them elsewhere too

balloondolls
>>8535149

You mean the use of the sound effects-as-words? Because I'm sure that's pretty commonplace. The actual "schlurp" word-graphic however I just designed today, although to be fair it originates from a specific font, so perhaps the font itself has been used somewhere else, as it usually goes with typefaces :)

Anonymous

I for one love the comic format as it allows us to more directly listen to the conversation taking place during the action. The sample you posted with the back and forth between Hitomi and Fuki is amazing! The way Hitomi is talking about how big she is, and how Hitomi is describing Hitomi's tits as "sucking" on her cock adds another dynamic. That being said, I would also like to see the compete pictures without the captions as well.

balloondolls
>>8535763

Glad you like it! And fear not, full res images will be included alongside the comic format

balloondolls
>>8534697

Thanks! Just aiming to develop the storytelling further with the comic format, but the images will still be available too :)

Anonymous

Wow this was an unexpected and welcome addition 😄 nice work! The panels do a great job of visual storytelling, I really like the progression. Hitome taking that clit like a champ! I like your choice of font, gives a very manga feel. Handdrawn almost. Good call on the different colour speech bubbles too, it makes it easy to tell who's talking. Hope I'm not alone in liking the sound effects - especially SHLURP 😁 Though, probably the *pulll* is the weakest. It should be wetter sounding, like *shliicckkk* maybe? I think some of the other commenters picked up on something - it feels a bit cramped and not just that there are 5 large panels on the page. Maybe do some close ups of the characters faces when they are talking? The penetration panels are pure gold, you should have them front & center to draw the viewer's eye. Maybe have close-ups of Hitome/Fuki + dialogues in the corners? I would be tempted to put the last to panels on a page together and expand them vertically so you can get Fuki in the shot. Really great stuff man, please do more of these!

balloondolls
>>8536381

As always great feedback, thanks SV. Considering the subject matter of this specific page, I'll probably be changing up this image sequence's panel layout and such in the final full length comic (specially since some of these suggestions would make for more visual impact).

Anonymous

good idea to bring the whole thing to life a bit more :) !

Anonymous

Hmmm, to be honest and i think you are asking us to be it, i do not like it personally.

balloondolls
>>8550310

Well, I'm sure not everyone will, but that's ok :) there will still be the usual full res images as well!

Anonymous

Idk it's alright I'd rather have just a solo text frame like the misadventures

Anonymous

If it is fun for you, do it, but the straight up images are less distracting

Anonymous

Love it, but mix up the some with a few establishing shots as well

XLModel Scout

Getting a bit more of a story around and insights of the characters is good stuff! I like it -- but don't want to miss the full pictures.