FiMfictions - Taking Another Career Option (Patreon)
Published:
2015-01-29 01:22:33
Imported:
2022-12
Content
Taking Another Career Option by DJLowrider:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/22338...
Greetings,
A little while ago, SephReunion123 asked me to review this story. After reading it a couple times, I found it mildly enjoyable but severely lacking in small things that would make it much better.
Be sure to let me know what you think. Upon looking into DJLowrider's page, I've found that he has a number of other stories with very interesting premises. However, I haven't had a chance to look into them yet. It may be a safe bet that I can expect similar qualities and issues that I found with this story.