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The lady wot lunched a little too much - chapter 7 (Patreon)

Published:
2021-07-31 21:13:03
Edited:
2021-08-19 17:53:37
Imported:
2022-03

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Here it is at last! Really hope you enjoy it.

Feedback of any kind is very welcome. I hope there are some enjoyable scenes here! I promise the next chapter will advance the story a bit more! 

Special thanks to Samster for the encouragement and proofreading!

Comments

Samster

Proof reading flatters me - I basically read it and said that's awesome, post it! Absolutely love the set up and descriptions. Abby and Fatima with their way too tight party dresses and getting stuck together in the door...and their whole attitude is so sexy. Along with Gemma, Holly et al back home drinking Prosecco and eating pizza. Loved all the action there. Honestly, the best WG fiction I've read in a long long time.

JDart

Nice update - lots of good bits in there. The highlight for me was Holly’s wardrobe malfunction- that was a nice side story with good imagery. I particularly like hearing the interactions between Gemma and Holly; the kinds of things they find funny etc. We get teased with it a little bit here - ‘Pelican Pete’ etc… but I think in some of the earlier chapters this has been one of your main strengths as an author that’s made this story so strong and unique I wonder if you could have gone into a bit more detail about the reaction to this event. It’s quite an extreme thing to happen which I’m sure would cause a lot of self loathing etc - I’d love to know what was going through poor Holly’s mind immediately after. I suppose the one thing i found a little unbelievable was that she’d be still keen to chow down on a load of garlic bread after exposing her fat arse to everyone in the room…. I see her as being a bit more classy than that (interesting one to discuss?)

halrion
>>64885384

Thanks! The Gemma and Holly interactions are the easiest - and perhaps my favourite bits to write. I feel I know their relationship pretty well. You're quite right about Holly. My excuse is that she's so drunk she didn't notice that it happening (I think I mentioned that she was apparently oblivious to it). Still, even that is perhaps a little hard to believe? (Even if it's warm in the summer house!) Perhaps I should alter this or develop it in the next chapter. It was actually quite a late addition to the chapter, so maybe I didn't think it through enough!

Joe

Amazing as always! Absolutely loved every bit of it, who is the hottie in your new propic???

halrion
>>64900714

Thanks! It's Amelia from The Perfect Dress. Full pic to be posted this week. (The banner image is a commission pic of the commissioner's OC, which I'll post tomorrow.)

Matt O

Great stuff! The descriptions of the drunken duo were utterly delicious, their fatty flailing and helpless unfitness were incredibly inticing

halrion

Thanks so much! I have a few other projects to work on but would definitely be interested in taking commissions once they're done.

SpartacusDA

Your descriptions continue to be top notch, the oblivious and primal greed of Holly and Gemma is 10/10. Love the baby goat imagery especially.