On Top Of The World (Patreon)

Hey!

Commission time. 

This is the third part of a three part story. You can find the first part here and the second part over here.

This one went through a lot of editing and rewriting - on my part, not the commissioners. At first I wasn't happy with it for a bunch of reasons, so I tore it down. Basically, there was just way too much story. Since it was the last part of something that had already had a bunch of story (wherein the second part kinda tied up any loose threads anyway) I wanted it to be super sexually charged and frisky. But then it was a little too sexually charged so I had to rewrite more it and... well, we have a nice balance now, I think. It's still highly pornographic, though.

Anyway, it took a couple of days longer than expected. I'm happy with it now. Here it is!

The arch mage, Jana - is unexpectedly joined on her rampage through the city by her fiancée, Claris. The two of them 

CONTAINS: GTS, F/F/male micros, City Destruction, Paws, Watersports, Oral Vore, Fatal, Unwilling - 10,000 words

This might be the last growth related thing for a little bit. The rest of the commissions this month focus more on shrinking - which is fitting, because they both involve Kyobi, and she loves shrinking people. Becoming city-sized isn't really her thing. She's more into getting you lost between the floorboards - or her toes - or, y'know, anywhere on or in her body.

I noticed that pretty much every commission I'm writing as of late involves big girls. Next time I do a run (probably toward the end of the month when my commitments are finally cleared up) I'll make sure to try and take on a more balanced load. I love big girls, but I really miss writing big boys doing big boy things.

I'll have another commission this time next week, roughly. This will be Being Human Chapter 5. Before that, though, I'll be posting A Tiny Furry In A Huge World v1.3. I'll also be closing that game choice poll for this month's bonus ending in a couple of hours and posting a character poll, so... look forward to that!

Hope you're all having a lovely Friday!