[All you need is Love] story board old version page 4 (Patreon)

Hi there!
I'm actually writing the new script and I'm proud of! I think it's really better than this version. Shorter, funnier, better!
I don't know when I'll finish it, tho. This is still the writing process right now =/

About the page:
In this part, Cadance is watching the sky with Shining Armor. She likes it. Shining Armor sees a cloud that look like a baby and would suggest it to Cadance who doesn't see nor understand. Embarassed, he would change the subject but a mail pony arrives with a strange object. It's a sun that create an hologram with magic. A small dragon, named Sting, in name of the Sun-Queen Selendis, invites Cadance to come in her land, Unicornia.

English google translation
Cloud view. Cadance and Shining Armor are on the grass and watching them.

CADANCE:
Look! This one has the shape of a unicorn!

SHINING ARMOR:
And that one, it looks like a rabbit!

CADANCE:
A turtle here!

SHINING ARMOR:
And there a! ... alligator ...?

CADANCE (chuckles):
You were right, my love. Watching the clouds makes me feel good.

SHINING ARMOR (touching Cadance's horn with his):
I just got to know you, little Pegasus!

Cadance smiles and they continue to watch the clouds.

SHINING ARMOR (sees the shape of a baby in the clouds.):
Sweetheart ! That one! Look!

CADANCE:
Yes ?

SHINING ARMOR:
Don't you see anything?

CADANCE:
Mmmh ... No, not really. Did you spot something?

SHINING ARMOR (annoyed):
Oh, hem ... I ... No, I ... I thought you'd get there ...

CADANCE:
Oh ? Okay.

SHINING ARMOR (thinks for a moment and has an idea and sees a banana in their fruit basket next to him):
Hin ... Hum ... Hm ... And how about some of (whisper in his ear and lift the banana) "Where did the banana go"? Just between you and me, obviously.

CADANCE (blushes suddenly):
Ooohoho! Why not ! Even if you cheat; there is always another one!

MESSENGER (comes running, a letter to the mouth):
Your Majesty ! I've something to show you.

SHINING ARMOR (suitor):
Aowh ...

CADANCE (after a compassionate smile to her husband):
"Something" ?

MESSENGER (hands him an object resembling a sun):
It magically appeared at the castle. Look.

SHINING ARMOR:
What is it ?

CADANCE (uses his magic to catch him):
No idea, it looks like a ... Oh!

A hologram starts.

STING (the hologram):
Goodsun to you, Princess Mi Amore Cadenza. My name is Sting!

CADANCE:
Oh, hey! A little dragon! Like Spike, your sister's assistant!

SHINING ARMOR:
And she knows your full name.

STING:
We only know that name.

CADANCE:
Hiii! She hears us!

STING:
Of course I hear you! The opposite would be shameful!

SHINING ARMOR:
That for a surprise ...

CADANCE (resuming a smile):
So this is a message, is that it?

STING:
Absolutely. I am the spokesperson of our Sun-Queen, the resplendent Selendis.

SHINING ARMOR:
Selendis?

CADANCE:
I don't have the honor of knowing her. What does her majesty Selendis want?

STING:
May you, Princess Mi Amore Cadenza, meet her in our country, Licornia.