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Found page 117 (Patreon)

Published:
2022-07-18 07:46:46
Imported:
2022-07

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Awww no that didn't go to plan at all.

So here's the original https://www.furaffinity.net/view/7111231 and here's the new one...

https://www.dropbox.com/s/oj7o9e712mjvoqs/117.png?dl=0

Now here's a question for you because im genuinely on the fence about it.  Part of me wants to add the original words back into that last panel, but part of me feels like the page feels stronger without them.  What do you think?

Comments

Anonymous

Hmmm... Paul's clearly on a downer in the last panel. While the text does clarify what he's thinking, it's not essential. Leaving it out is fine.

Anonymous

I think it works better without the last line.

Anonymous

Its much stronger as is imo

Anonymous

I like the new panel, silence is golden

Anonymous

I feel like silence is more powerful.

Anonymous

It doesn’t need the text how it’s drawn conveys the feeling in just as powerful way.

Anonymous

Maybe a 'sigh' to add emphasis, but the picture does convey Paul's feelings extremely well without any text. Shows how much you have developed your skills! ^^

Anonymous

Definitely silence in the last panel is better

Anonymous

I can feel the rejection

Anonymous

These last few pages have been absolutely killer for art quality. I think the last panel is perfect without the dialog, too.