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Finished Video? (Patreon)

Published:
2018-08-25 19:53:33
Imported:
2021-10

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I went with mostly voice over on this one, let me know what you think! Also I might use a better name.

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Better To Be Upside Down?

I test weather it is better to turn upside down to get a heavy gas out of my lungs. Help me make videos by donating here: https://www.patreon.com/CodysLab Follow me on Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/codydonreeder SubReddit: https://www.reddit.com/r/codyslab/

Comments

Anonymous

Audio seems slightly out of sync with events in video but otherwise looks great!

Roy Eltham

Looks pretty good, although I would switch the last bit with the standing upright balloon/voice bit to before you say see you next time. It feels tacked on the way it is now.

Anonymous

You might also want to re-record the part where you contrast "500% heavier than air" against "90% lighter." You put all your emphasis on the "90%" and none on the word "lighter."

Anonymous
>>14959064

Aside from the delivery of the line, presenting the numbers in this way might be somewhat misleading. It's impossible for one thing to be more than 100% lighter than another thing, so "90% lighter" is actually more significant than "500% heavier." You might want to phrase it more like, "The heavier gases are over 5 times as dense as air, whereas helium is one tenth as dense." Then the relative magnitudes of the comparisons would be clearer.

Anonymous

No mention of the t-shirts?

Brian Reddeman

The last part feels out of sequence. Having it right after the upside part followed by your explanation seems better to me. Great video, even better than your first iteration.

Anonymous

Good video, all seems to make sense and flows nicely. That last part seems slightly tacked-on but that seems to be what you were going for. Once again, good job

Max Eliaser

Halon+smoke was a great visualization, way better than the plastic bottle lung idea I suggested. I think scripting the video helped make it more concise too.

Anonymous

OI’m

Anonymous

Does being upside down affect the amount of dizziness induced by the gas? In the part where you are upright, you look like you almost blackout.

Anonymous

I enjoy the scripted voiceover presentation. It sounds more professional and composed, though I see much more personality and genuine interest in your standard presentation. As always, nicely done! BTW, nice NileRed gc

Anonymous

You should also address the fact that the bronchi don't attach to the top of the lungs, but nearly half way down. So when you flip upside down, the top of the lungs are now in a position to be a container, just as the bottom of the lungs were when you were upright. If it was all due to gravity, the heavy gas would just be passed back and forth between the top and bottom of your lungs every time you flipped.

Anonymous

Much better presentation Cody

Anonymous

The voiceover is out of sync with the action just after four minutes.

Anonymous

Title suggestion: "Stop the heavy talking man"

CodysLab
>>14961757

That’s probably because it took a couple takes to get it right. Much harder to remember what I said. I ended up writting it down and sticking it up next to the camera.