Read chapter 3 contest version before the next raw update (Patreon)

I'm posted an update to the contest version. It has a few additional scenes that gives more understanding on North's character and how Cora's glitter power works.

This chapter has been massively edited in comparison to the raw version.
The contest rules said something about the contest entry cannot be 'offensive', whatever the heck that means.
So, better safe than sorry, I use more subtlety in the sexual language, but it still convey the same meaning, to avoid getting disqualified.

Due to all the recent changes on webtoon discover, I'm gonna move any future sexy scenes to patreon. So I'm willing to compromise on the sex themes with my contest entry, (just a bit, not a lot) but violence stays at 100%.
The raw version remains as is, I just made a few minor compromises to give this contest my best shot.

At the end, my proofreader thought this version is actually make the comic better. Either way, let me know here or on webtoon what you think between this and the original.

Thank you for reading!