[HD Manga Page] Chapter 4 - Page 16 + 17 (Patreon)

This week's workload was quite exhausting. I almost could have done those pages within a week but the other projects drained completely my energy out of me.

I did a pretty stupid mistake at the early draft stage and  just noticed it until the refinement process. The two last panels on page 16 were originally switched but I noticed that Taya was on the wrong side and was standing on the right from Winrow. I had to change the position of the speech bubbles and the panel size to fix the problem.

Dialogue scenes like these makes me often become worried about the heaviness of all the text content. I even looked into some of my manga from my bookshelf to confirm if it may be nothing unusual to have pages with so many speech bubbles depicted like that. Part of me wants to split the dialogue parts and expand the pages for the scene but the other part really wants to avoid to slow down the progress and narration pace any longer... Quite a dilemma.

The arrangement of pages plays quite a big role for the reader's impression here. I want them to turn every page with a feeling of thrill and excitement so that's why every page should feel like a cliffhanger ...kinda haha.