Cursed relic p49 to 57 basic storyboard (Patreon)
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Now as soon as I reread them I realized that the moment in the temple is just going too fast. More building up is needed here to raise a bit the stake and set up the atmosphere. That's the interesting things with storyboard, you get to see a version that might end up pretty different compared to the final one ;)
In that case and according to your feedbacks I see 4 to 5 more pages added ( more during the climbing of Elorie's body by Saki where we'll see large shots of Elorie, more internals, more during the digestion, more build up during the temple scene. And perhaps a single large panel of her throat when the guy ( or maybe a girl in the final version) steps in
As always, please don't hesitate to give your opinion, it's very helpful to me ;3
first part : https://www.patreon.com/posts/cursed-relic-p1-11253072
Second part : https://www.patreon.com/posts/cursed-relic-p17-11938064
Third part : https://www.patreon.com/posts/cursed-relic-p29-14543781
Fourth part : https://www.patreon.com/posts/cursed-relic-p37-17672190