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Felarya tour flat color WIP (Patreon)

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2017-09-04 21:48:55

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2018-12-27 12:37:39

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2021-06

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Ailith

What a kind and helpful fairy! I'd name her Azure.

2017-09-04 21:51:47.373000

Nodrog

Will any of my suggested names be in the poll? ; w ; My company: Keep dreaming buddy.

2017-09-04 21:56:10.449000

Nanakra

Watch that last step just after the bend, its a doozie of a drop! Anything fairy is good in my book, +1 for Azure as well.

2017-09-04 22:15:39.113000

Anonymous

this is hot!

2017-09-04 22:34:11.807000

Ehren

Oh, the internal view is new, I like it! Can I recommend making the flower in her hair a bit more of a noticeably different hue of blue than her hair? I think it's just a tiny bit too close right now. Then again, it's a WIP, so maybe you were planning to do that anyway.

2017-09-04 22:53:46.612000

God catch ! you are right :)

2017-09-04 23:15:56.766000

;3

2017-09-04 23:23:24.704000

Anonymous

Uhuhuhu <3 *.*

2017-09-04 23:33:24.610000

Doc

But who is the best tour guide in all of felarya?

2017-09-05 02:09:08.674000

GizmoChinasa

Awesome! I need a tour sometime! :3 I'd prefer a long visit to the gullet exhibit! x3

2017-09-05 02:49:27.337000

JohnboyX

Really really good :-) . Apart from the adjustments/additions you wanted to make yourself this only needs a bit more detail on the human in the fairies mouth so you can better make out that the prey is a girl (maybe by revealing more like with the prey in Melany's mouth in "Trapper and prey" for example her chest if that is still possible) with the inclusion of a saliva string directly hitting her and then it's perfect (in my opinion) . Fabulous work so far °__^.

2017-09-05 19:02:14.264000

Anonymous

You know what, I think I liked the original B&W's last panel better. Her eyes seemed better oriented at her stomach, her lips' curves were cuter for some reason, too! The uvula shot and burp in that panel feel superfluous, as well, and I actually liked the simpleness of no stomach shot to leave it to the imagination, but that's just because I don't care for stomach shots, I think : P

2017-09-05 22:38:58.542000

PrinnyDood

Looks great! Felaryan 'tours' are a longstanding tradition, and you'd be amazing how many natives are happy to take time out of their day to provide them. Such a friendly place! x3

2017-09-07 11:05:06.255000

alright I'm noting this and I'll see what I can do about it in the final version :)

2017-09-07 13:33:04.167000

I know right ! XD

2017-09-07 13:34:00.863000

up to a lot of debate XD if I had to chose I think I have a weakness for Subeta ^^

2017-09-07 21:11:07.743000

Anonymous

Don't feel pressured, I just figured I'd voice out one of my rare nitpicks :D

2017-09-07 21:51:03.959000

thank you ! glad you like it :D

2017-09-07 22:31:08.646000

nice name :)

2017-09-08 16:23:41.180000

you came up with a really long list so I think so yes :)

2017-09-08 17:04:42.751000

Oh it's a drop but there is squishy material all around you to aleviate it XD

2017-09-08 17:05:46.227000

I wouldn't mind it myself XP it's the stomach that comes after that could be a bit problematic ^^

2017-09-08 17:06:54.161000

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