Sorry Daddy I've Been Naughty pt 1 (Script) (Patreon)

Production is well underway for a few upcoming releases, starting with Slave Wave - but I my daily writing discipline will continue!  

Here's the latest - the Catholic perversion one I've promised for far too long.  (This one's cast, btw.)  It's chock full of gaslighting and manipulation and NLP,  but not full blown hypnosis per se.

Description: This is a duet - a two person show - between the PRIEST and the PENITENT.  Their names aren’t referenced much, but the PENITENT is Krissy and the PRIEST is Father Abraxas. 

It is a third person narrative.  Later chapters will encourage confession from the listener, but the series starts in the third person.

Given the popularity of "Catholic schoolgirl" tropes, it bears mention up top that:

All characters are written as 18+!!!!111!!!!1!!!!!!!!!111!!  It is a university. That fact’s embedded and not screamed up front, but that’s only because expo can be clunky. 

This is an evocation of a fantasy. What happens here is BAD. In reality, any eroticism should absolutely NOT occur with massive power differentials. Age gaps associated with authority differentials are bad and they null the possibility of genuine consent. Also, religion based gaslighting is bad. This is pretty axiomatic, but the subject matter here compels a repetition of those axioms.

This is the first chapter of the seven chapter Confession series.  The backdrop for the series is St. Justina’s. The name’s chosen deliberately, as this is an alternate timeline for Justina, but that comes later in the series.

The Confession series plays with repression and release, in a gaslighting context of twisted ritual. Each chapter covers a different “virtue”. Each of the Seven Cardinal Virtues is twisted and corrupted into sexual need and humiliation. 

This turns very seriously humiliating and disciplinary.  THIS IS A FUCKING WHOLE LOT OF WRONG.  Please be fully content warned even for reading the script.

ACTOR NOTES: I play the Priest. He’s kindly and gentle and gradually moves the Pentitent into disciplined servitude.  Then he’s much much less kind.  The Pentitent is shy, awkward, and embarrassed. She is the blushing innocent and remains so to heighten the humiliation.

As always, PN means production note – actors can disregard.