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  • 2024-05-26
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Again took longer than expected, but this time it was because the chapter was being difficult. I had to write it twice, and it still came out on the shorter side. I wanted to add another scene to hit my word count target, but it just didn't fit, whether I'm speaking thematically or spatially. The more I worked on that scene, the more rushed/tacked-on it felt, and it quickly became clear it needed to be its own chapter. That's for next time. For now, process aside, I'm still a fan of how this one came out. Hope you enjoy!

Comments

Judah Frankel

Nice! I think this chapter strikes a good balance. It’s a bit filler-y, as it doesn’t really add much new information beyond Reece’s opinions and a bit of data on Platinum/Reading, but it does a good job of developing Nem’s character and setting the foundations for Rain’s future relationship with the new Warden. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

ChillyPepper

Every chapter of delve is a delight, but this one and the previous especially. Full steam ahead, Engine of Change!

Doodlyboy15

Ok, I can see how that's a pretty clear ending for that bit. Like water drops to parched earth, it's never quite enough but I'll happily take it. Thanks as always!

WannaBeATree

Great chapter and a good ending to the scene! I can see why adding another would worsen it.

Jonathan de Jong

Nice, this chapter prophesying the late-game of the story (altering the system, saving it from doom) was something I had in mind and wanted for ages, I'm happy to see it's definitely inching in that direction though, since Delve's system is very interesting to pick apart :)

JC Silver

WE ARE SO BACK! It's really refreshing to have an MC like Rain who will cut through the upper-crust social shenanigans and extend a hand of trust to a potential ally. Can't wait to see how the rescue team interacts with Amnesiac Lavarro

WannaBeATree

I guess he can do it by showering everyone with one shock after another. That way he is forcing them to actually think instead of just doing the standard actions, therby having them come to the same conclusions that Rain came to, before he engaged with them. He is lucky that none of the people he interacts with seems to have a secret agenda Rain doesn't know about. Though if they are powerfull, they don't need deception and if they are weak, he can read them, so it could totally work, even realistically. Reece really is such a bullshit OP power for Rain if one thinks about it that way. No fighting, only winning indeed. :)

Zarik0

Can't read ! And open the files ! I get a: Code 902 "AttachmentNotFound" For all three files... Chapter 271 work fine so it seem its not on my side. Will look again later late in the day and hope its fixed :)

Bryan D

Good choice on delaying further exposition. This was fully formed and concluded. (The additional ideas denote promises for the future - which we all support)

Zarik0

Fixed ! Done nothing, just retried normally just now after coming back home (im on browser Mozilla)

Cirvante

I love how Reece is shitting on Nem, serving under her must have been hell. Even when she was dissing Lightbreaker he was catching strays lol.

WannaBeATree

I only just noticed, but from last chapter: "Shit,” Rain swore. “How bad?”“A near-total coup,” Tanergal said sourly. “I alone stand with the chosen successor of Warden Vatreece, preserve her memory. The rest follow the usurper.”" And in this one: "[...] And Tanergal, if you could gather the other Guardians and identify a trusted scribe, that would be of great help.”“Sir,” Tanergal said, his mouth twisting as he recognized the dismissal. What did Tanergal mean when he said "I alone"? Is he the only guardian left? Then why did Nem say to gather them? Or was it a polite way of saying 'go away for a time and have a scribe ready when I call you back'?

SenescentSoul

Yup, originally I had there being a few more non-important Guardians in the faction, but I changed that and forgot to update that line. Changed to "senior Sentinels"

WannaBeATree

A small thing: "The Custodian said they were allied. He meant it, and his actions at Fel Sadanis and elsewhere stood behind the truth dripping from those words." I can't find any place where Rain said they were allied in the last 2 chapters. Nem did mention it a few times though. There was that letter in Ch257, but there was also no mention of an alliance, just assistance and collaboration.

Przemek Kowalczyk

Great work. I think this chapter benefited a lot by you giving it additional attention (rewriting it, spending more time). I read every paragraph with a deep interest 👍

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter!

Alden Wilner

I was waiting at the latest Royal Road chapter; finally broke down and jumped on the Patreon wagon last week, and it was totally worth the investment. Considering the number of stories I am following on RR, this is a *very* dangerous development for the budget. I console myself with the thought that Delve is still one of the top stories, IMO, so I can resist. I can! I hope. I like the coincidence of how well this cliff meshes with the RR cliff. Problem set up; solution set up; fireworks incoming? Perhaps! Author, please take your time, take care of yourself, and, umm… enjoy my tiny tithe.

Some_Jawa

Whoever thumbs downed this chapter. I will hunt you. I will find you. And i will make you like it.