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Angry videogame daemonette of Slaanesh.

Let me know about mistakes in the text.

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Malhavoc

The simple answer is she needs to pray to Slaanesh for tentacles. They are the multipurpose tool for all situations.

Dr.S.Shenanigans

Heh nice...minor suggestion but "third one this week"

Anonymous

Рачина! гыгы.

Animeplayer

That is adorable. XD

Anonymous

"third on the week" i think you meant "Third one this week" or "That's the third one this week" but i like the drawing. their are quite a few odd choices in your dialog that betray the fact English is not your first language. you're doing a good job, its just not typical to phrase things like that. no hate, love your art.

flick

Thanks! Yeah, my English's worst. Could you say where the odd choices and how to fix them?

flick

Я к сожалению, не играл в доту, поэтому решил не шутить про рак на миде, не шаря в сабже)

Esper

Ah, girlfriends

The Silver Socialist

I think you should say "My Monitor! That's the third one this week!"

The Silver Socialist

I think you may want to consider having your character say "I fucked your mom" instead of "I fuck your mom!