Home Artists Posts Import Register
The Offical Matrix Groupchat is online! >>CLICK HERE<<

Downloads

Content

And here we go! The start of book 2, coming in hot at 17k words, in both epub and PDF versions.

Thanks for reading, everyone!

Comments

Patchumz

As much as damaged characters make for interesting characters, I think Mark needs to have a therapy episode sooner rather than later. Him getting weird and jumpy all the time when his thoughts stray to archmages or dragons or anything is really going to get old. Also as much as I enjoyed Erick from Ar'K, the only time he solved therapy problems was when he grew so powerful his mind no longer functioned in a way therapy could change... that would be a sad affair for this series. He can have an interesting rough past without making for a rough present and future, mentally. He won't stop being interesting just because he stopped slicing up elevators.

sira212

I agree with this. My expectation is to see him grow and overcome this rather than this being a flaw throughout the story.

Tristan R Mitchell

I wonder if there could be some kind of "power copy" talent? Something like an Arch talent that lets you replicate a power for each of the other categories. Probably doesn't give you the passive boost to the attributes as you finish your Astral Body with those powers as the major limiter, so you could only use the powers at the level of strength a one-talent Arch has. But still, you would likely get a slight bonus for having unoccupied slots, and you would be a decent Brawly and Mage, but a terrible Psychic.

Tristan R Mitchell

My other big question is, what are demons? Like, you have said multiple times that they are astral without physical, like the opposite of baseline humans, but yet they also have a city on the moon? I thought maybe they were created in the original split 5000 years ago, but then we had a 25000 year old demon. Are they the same as the gods? We know the New Pantheon changed the rules of magic and it has been mentioned multiple times that demons wrote hose original rules. Are they ancient humans that went through some kind of apotheosis as a group? Are new demons appearing, or are there only so many?