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Another weekly release!? on time, this time, too?!

what's the world coming to!

idk, man~

20k words, woot woot

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Nick Youngstrom

You are crushing it with these weekly releases!

s476

Ty

Alba

Ty

axel jensen

i don't think mephis is around anymore

Raganash

Good Chapter? Chapters?

RD404

Memphis was destroyed but Memphi rose from the ashes. the first mention of the city is in the first chapter of the story, near the beginning. Mark's uncle Alexandro lives there

Patchumz

That was quite fun, though I was moderately annoyed that he decided to take shortcuts with his kinesis. He was so dedicated to efficiently accomplish all he could with Union under his allowed umbrella of commands (since he was specifically told not to risk coming up with new commands). However he immediately decides to cripple progress with kinesis after being directly told that the proper way to learn is to avoid any somatic components when moving matter around. He sat in his room and brute forced the ability to wield his metal with supreme willpower, but the mention of not guiding metal with his hands is immediately thrown out. He's literally just chilling in a forest with no enemies around at the time and a monster radar built into his astral body in the form of Union. He should be aiming for perfection from the start so he doesn't have to beat out bad habits during life and death scenarios. Also kind of bugged me that he decided to go for janky Mistborn flight instead of just working on ways to train to lift himself up. Hopefully he gets over his weird hyper-innocent-idealist mindset very fast. Not expecting people to be bad and not wanting to use Union on enemy monsters when told that's how all Inquisitors fight dragons and such is silly.

Cameron C

I like that he didn’t kill them in response, because while these were clearly enemies of humanity he isn’t at that point / he might never be willing to kill people. That scene at the end was so interesting to me as a result

Bloodorange17

Another amazing chapter. Did you mean to say California took over the East Coast of the United States?

luckeybrady (edited)

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2024-07-12 00:09:37 Can you make a Wordpress website to read the novel on? Make the Patreon pages password protected? Because I read on my phone and haven’t been able to read the pdfs at all because the words are too small.
2024-07-12 00:09:37 Can you make a Wordpress website to read the novel on? Make the Patreon pages password protected? Because I read on my phone and haven’t been able to read the pdfs at all because the words are too small.
2024-07-12 00:09:37 Can you make a Wordpress website to read the novel on? Make the Patreon pages password protected? Because I read on my phone and haven’t been able to read the pdfs at all because the words are too small.
2024-06-28 20:02:18 Can you make a Wordpress website to read the novel on? Make the Patreon pages password protected? Because I read on my phone and haven’t been able to read the pdfs at all because the words are too small.

Can you make a Wordpress website to read the novel on? Make the Patreon pages password protected? Because I read on my phone and haven’t been able to read the pdfs at all because the words are too small.

RD404

are you able to open up the epubs? that's the other option in the post

RD404

i thought epubs were readable by everyone! ahhhhhh i don't really want to update a whole other Wordpress thingy, or whatever it is. mmmm. i used to just upload chapters directly to patreon, but it's been kinda nice to not do that.

luckeybrady

Download it from the email and then transfer it to the kindle app to read it

Alec

Page 3, California is on the west coast not east coast? Unless geography is different or something

MrHrulgin

That land-bridge between Central and South America has a name, at least in the present day: the Darién gap. The name goes back to the late 1700's, so well before the split in timelines occured.