Immune from Prosecution (Patreon)

I had Erin cast an eye over this one a while ago, and she felt it was wrong somehow.  I have added a few bits, but I think that the central problem is that the protagonist is evil, although I like to think of her as only evil in male form, but now the complete opposite.  But tell me if I have not left that issue hanging?  And whether that is the way it should be?