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Help With Writing (Patreon)

Published:
2018-07-18 06:40:11
Imported:
2021-08

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I've been trying to write a story for the last year, but every single one has failed. I get about five thousand words in, and I realize that I either don't like the direction I've taken, or that the idea has simple become too convoluted for me to keep a track of. I've tried writing shorter scenes between two or three characters that have no corresponding story (literally none), but they aren't very fun. 

Is anyone on here (Patreon/Tumblr) a fan of my shitty stories, the ones on Literotica and Hentai Foundry? Can anyone explain to me what they liked about it, and what they'd want to see from me if I started writing again? Do you have any simple ideas for a story that you'd like to see me write? 

Comments

Ace

Man, seems like you were the anon who asked you. Hope you find your answer buddy

Dantels

I really really like your openers with the sex butting in to disrupt a daily life. Unfortunately that seems to be the part you're having the least trouble with so I'll need more thought to figure out good advice on continuation stages.

Dvspuss

I like how the world of your stories is very sex positive and people are not looked down upon for having sex I also love the competitive aspect of you stories, as for simple ideas I had one about Nintendo characters playing Mario party this way you son't actually have to write the story (they are just playing a game) while still having a lot of opportunity to explore new sittings and mini games

Dvspuss
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I also feel the need to add that while yes more characters having sex with each other the better it is&lt; it is not that important and you can do without them and focus in a smaller numbers of characters

John Smith

Look I will level with you I like most of your content cause its fantasy, near future and sci fi based and what I mostly like is its some of the only genre fair I can read where a Black Guy can get laid in it. I first started following you for the Nadia Merchant stuff. Your content seems pretty well rated on Literotica. I have read all your stories pretty much. Now if your asking me what I like to see you finish I like superhero4 with the Teen Titans Knockoff. Plus you know superheroes are pretty popular these days so that be fun. Untitled 11 with the highschoolers was fun. Bits and Baubles in My Succubes and Untitled 7 with D and D alt world also have some potential. But heck I will take anything when it comes to smut you are my favorite writer but I think that might be cause we have similar interests such as Magic, Conan, etc.

John Smith

For Sequels or followups, Fairy Tale Fuck Fights, be nice if you finished the Trilogy of Baba Black Sheep, Mary Contrary and Little Bo Peep. Might be a good one to look at I believe that Fairy Tale Fuck Fights 05 is your highest rated story on Literotica. So maybe reread it and try to replicate that in your stories. More Kee-Va and Brule or Bunker Buster would be cool as well. You just need to keep a tight focus, your problem seems to be the worlds expand way too broadly sometimes with tangents. Anyway big fan I love you to see you writing more again.

Anonymous

Sometimes what one needs is an editor. I'd be happy to read and edit something that you're working on. Perhaps suggest a way to finish it up.

Anonymous

Those batgirl vs spider-gwen and Lois Lane vs Mary Jane stories were right up my alley. A rotating cast of characters and a recurring host, an introduction for both characters and a fight. The formula was entertaining and always left me wanting to read a follow up of the losers receiving their punishment. For me the fighting and the domination of another strong reluctant character was the appeal so the Fairy Tale Fuck Fights, bunker buster stories, and the tale end of Aphrodite’s shell were my favorite. Wouldn’t mind seeing a continuation to any of those.

Master Dragon

How about a Story were either Keeva get's a mount and learns how to tame it or Something with a breif story of Mark's mom day in the life as a leader of her clan. Should be very simple straight forward and you can add some sexy scenes in there easy.

That black guy

I have a similar problem, I'd probably say go for those five thousand words then look at what you wanted to do and cut out the rest or only leave mentions of the rest, say it was a Kee-va story, you don't need to mention how the batclan trains their bat's unless it's important to that part of the story but you do want to mention "Kee-va has heard the bat clan goes through rigorous training before they are allows to fly" and maybe took what you cut and placed it in a "Bible" document to refer back too

Anonymous

As someone who does writing commissions in his spare time, II have a few words in here. I have some compliments and criticisms, but I'll save that for later if you should want them. My advice to you is to figure out the ending first. Then all you have to do is work backwards. You enjoy puns in your work. Think of the punchline first and then work towards arriving at said punchline. I actually came up with a Cadence scene I plan to write for you soon. It won't be no more than three or four paragraphs. Just a short little scene poking fun at virgin sacrifices. Cadence is no virgin, hence the joke. But don't get so frustrated with yourself. I'll write several words and get frustrated. It's just part of the creative process. Creative sorts are moody.

Anonymous

What I loved most about your stories was how you made awesomely sexual and hot domination scenes, especially when it was men on men. You seemed to do your best when you were playing off either a) conventional stereotypes, like black men or cocky teenagers with jokes thrown in or b) old stories like tarzan or the fairy tales or even the universes you created like Mark the Barbarian or Nadia or even Kee Va. If you stick with one of those options, I'm 100% sure the story you make will be great.