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Josh has stopped drinking

Although this narrative is big broad strokes, it also makes the little details stand out as more significant when they do come up. Sometimes if your story is all details, you lose the forest for the trees

I've recently had a lot of thoughts about how too much detail in a story can ruin or distract from a compelling narrative. Sometimes the most immersive stories trust the reader to fill in the blanks