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False Spring | Page 47 (Patreon)

Published:
2020-12-21 17:00:04
Imported:
2021-04

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Aw looks like Jesse is willing to let things go. Or is he??

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Anonymous

Come jesse, let's be happy for Aaron and ogle some other beefy bois. 🤗🦌

Karma_Pup

Ooof. Always loved comics that have an actual story, emotional connection, and depth. Sex is fun but stuff like this really makes me care about the characters. Plus, the amazing artwork just makes all of that POP.

Iggy

God im in love with your characterization, it just feels so real and relatable. Good job man!

Anonymous

I deadass get so excited every time a new page drops. I haven’t had this enthusiasm since reading marvel comics as a kid. Your work is amazing 😭

Anonymous

My heart hurts but kinda in a good way. Loving this story a lot!!

Alejandro

It’s kinda sad but same time it’s very big of him to see things from Aaron’s perspective and how a relationship with Jesse could complicate things. Proud of jesse

Qwerty

😫😫😫😩😩😩 YOURE LITERALLY PLUCKING ALL MY HEART STRINGS RIGHT NOW !!!

DragonGamer758

When Jesse’s a bit more of an MVP than Aaron...

pj wolf

Aaron really sticks out. But... Jesse knows where he is. And that he's probably seen more of Aaron than these girls have.

Randy Hoss

Ok now first the ram and now the buck. If I don't see one of them muff diving or gobbling the booty like groceries in the next bit I might just up and get a bit upset! This is excellent as always keep up the great work. 👍

Anonymous

I would not mind seeing Aaron in a foursome with all those chicks! Lord knows he's got more than enough dick for it 👀

Anonymous

There's a lot to this story that I've been meaning to talk about for a while. The emotional and physical contrasts between these characters works very well to tell a more dramatic story, and I think it works very well to your advantage to make the story more impactful both in art and writing. You've got something really great, and I'm eager to see more as I've thoroughly enjoyed and been intrigued by the comic and where you'll take it next! Jesse deserves a committed love life, especially with all he's been through. If there's any character that has seen the most impact, growth and emotional stress, it's Jesse. He's obviously a very intelligent, organized, mature and wholesome yet complex guy, and I very much hope he gets to grow a committed love life with someone he loves. There's a lot of complexity in these characters, most of all in Jesse in following youthful desires while discovering what he wants and needs to be happy, hence why I really appreciate that Jesse after all the time that's passed put his foot down against Aaron for him to realize the seriousness of how Jesse feels towards him, and that Aaron's actions in romance and sex have great consequences in his relationship with Jesse, Cass and maybe more. Aaron's reasoning in neglecting a more serious relationship with Jesse is realistic but emotionally distressing. I very much liked seeing Aaron's background in greater detail, to give more context and thereby building more upon the social issues of sexuality in an unfair and cruel world. It makes his character and the story very interesting and layered, and it sets up some great storytelling about social issues in sexuality as the prime conflict, and I'd love to see you dig deeper into this conflict for more social and emotional commentary. With this, the art style you've got also adds to the story in creating a colorful and exciting set of characters and events, but with a great touch of realism and contrast in both color and proportion to tell a grounded and seriously layered and relatable story. It's a great mix of expressing raw emotions but keeping it grounded in realism. Given you've set up complexity of homosexuality in a homophobic world and industry in football, it's revolving around something I can both relate to and care deeply about. I think there's an opportunity for a great narrative pay-off by giving Aaron a tough choice for him to really grow as a character by confronting his feelings for Jesse and his aspirations in football. In this regard, I could see Jesse being hassled by one of the other guys in the football team at this party - narratively representing the homophobic and toxic parts of masculinity in the football industry, which would push Aaron to either stand up to protect Jesse and face a rocky relationship with his football mates and potentially his family, or turn a blind eye to homophobia to preserve his place in the football team socially unscathed, but tarnish his relationship with Jesse forever. Whichever way this story goes, I think there's a Huge opportunity for character growth in this part of the story with something truly impactful, and given how much emotional stress as well as intimate euphoria Jesse has gone through at this point from both Aaron and Cass, I could see their relationship becoming balanced and wrapped together with both Aaron and Jesse facing emotional and ethical complexity by having to make difficult choices together for a layered journey in how they could either get together or fall out, no matter if you decide to keep it in line with the bonus comic where they end up together or not. I think there's a lot of great social and emotional commentary to be had from this comic, using sexual intimacy to further add to its complexity, and it's been done very well which is something very few writers and artists have accomplished. Keep up the great work!