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Busy one this week where I got more done than anticipated.

I finished my edits and playthroughs for chapter 3, which did take longer than expected. I forget just how many variables are going into these chapters now and I want to try and test for them all, so the testing/editing stage after each chapter will start to take longer.

To give you an idea, this is what a couple of pages from my checklist looks like:

I actually had 6 of these pages, lol.

Some of these are only small variations, but I think it really is adding so much depth to the scenes now and hopefully making your MC act more like your MC should, even outside of choice sets.

Chapter 3 is now with the amazing @spunkycatninja, who already sent me back her initial thoughts on the chapter, and I am SO encouraged by the excited responses she had!

After chapter 3, the word count is totalling: 133,419. A larger total than I was anticipating...

And then I started on chapter 4, which I've got further along on than I expected I'd manage this week.

I've just done the LT route starter (I've finished all the other romance openers) and...oof, guys, it stings, especially on one choice...

For Curse of Creek Edge I finally finished the last needed background for the demo.

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For Update+ this week, I thought I'd share the pain of the LT route with this snippet:

My gut tightens with guilt, the sensation so intense that I can't even look to ${adam} as we head out of the room.

$!{nate} doesn't say goodbye.

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There are other versions of this scene (some just as painful, and one that's actually...not too tugging on the heart strings).

Hope you all have a lovely weekend, and I'll talk to you next week! <3

 

(I'm still waiting for A LOT of replies about rewards. So if you're still waiting, then you may have an email, possibly in your junk folder, from me about it. If not, then please do get in contact and I'll sort that ASAP! It's never too late to get in touch!

I won't be around on the weekend, as I take a break from internet, but I'll send out rewards/messages ASAP!) 

Comments

Amber Foster

I’ve played both books an unholy amount of times and I still can’t bring myself to play the love triangle 😩 Adam and Nate were the first two characters I fell in love with and I don’t think my heart can handle watching them both be sad :(

Victoria Hadland

The LT is my favourite. But reading that....i am both intrigued and ready to be hurt, and terrified with the need to curl up into a pained ball.

Montana Jane

Woah I knew the LT would be... Heartbreaking but uh Woah. And I'm sorry... How many words are in just three chapters!? Wow, that is seriously mind-blowing!

Emily Smith

Oh no as much as I enjoy the Love triangle route due to the fact that Ava shows the detective more emotion than her single route I can't read Ava getting hurt nor coming in-between a friendship that Ava and Nat have but saying that It won't stop me reading it once book three is complete.

Mr. V

130 000 words on just three chapters ? That’s amazing. That’s the size of some games lol

Twilight Katana

Lordy. I have no idea how you even do all of that! And I'm not sure I'm ready for THAT LEVEL OF ANGST IN THE LT ROUTE! Gonna be worth it but MY HEART WILL BE DEAD!

Kaylin

Absolutely cannot WAIT to have my heart ripped out in the next demo update, I swear the LT will be the death of me.

Emily Smith

Will Ava (and whatever the male name is) during the LT route get the detective or will it always be Nat/ Nate?

Jordan Ellis

AHHHHH BOOK 3 IS ABOUT TO BE SO ANGSTY FOR THE LT

Ellie (edited)

Comment edits

2023-01-16 04:19:37 I live for the LT, this is for my main detective. Thank you so much for the sneak peek. hurts so good &lt;/3 Also you're amazing with the amount of progress you make in such short time &lt;3 You're an inspiration
2020-10-14 20:26:07 I live for the LT, this is for my main detective. Thank you so much for the sneak peek. hurts so good </3 Also you're amazing with the amount of progress you make in such short time <3 You're an inspiration

I live for the LT, this is for my main detective. Thank you so much for the sneak peek. hurts so good </3 Also you're amazing with the amount of progress you make in such short time <3 You're an inspiration