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This is the rough draft of the cover for Industrial Strength Magic. Cool, uncool? How could it be more cool?How could it be less uncool? Please, Blow this thread up!

I personally think the guy's a little too beefy to be Perry, but (shrug) And maybe a teeny bit more eyecandy for Hardcase to gawk at, but that's about all the notes I have.